lmao that was great i loved it so cute!

Love it. Very creative. (and cute!)

Aww! This fic was so cute! I love it! I like the way you made it funny while still giving it substance. As some other people have mentioned, you probably need to work on the formatting a bit and maybe read through it once more for minor spelling/gramatical errors, but the story was still very good, the plot was excellent, and Squall and Irvine are just so cute together! I absolutely love slash and although I usually read Seifer/Squall, I like a good Irvine/Squall every once in a while too, though they're a lot harder to find. Overall, this fic was a very enjoyable read and it is going on my favorites list. Good job!

Very cute story. I like how the plot played out but above all, Squally's puppy eyes just did me in... . You know, you don't get to see it often...

Would suggest to add some e.g. lines/spaces to mark off change of scene, just to give the reader some time to breathe... I suppose most of it have been stripped by the time you uploaded it?

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Awesome fic man, really.

OMG! That was so funny and cute! I really liked it! lol. Im adding it to my fav. list!

Aw... loved it!

I hope to see more Irvine/Squall from you soon.

absolutly Fabulous! LOVE IT and so funny! I really liked the fairys! I really love IxS's! :) write MORE Please! i also liked your other IxS! i reviewed under an anyomous name!

Very sweet and amusing. This is definitely better than I thought it was going to be from the summary. I thought it would be more like those humor stories that I dislike on

I like the end and the image of the fairies watching it like a soap opera. I guess it's one of those images for all the fan girls?

ok first of all the story is pretty bad. second u must be a newqbie since u dont know how to chapter manage. no one wants to read a story that long so divy it up into 2 or 3 chapters. subpar man just stop