Reviews for The Men in Her Life

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WhiteTigerLilly 2007-03-31 ch 1,	abuseSmall problem... You allude nothing of who's talking. I think it may be Sango's lover and her brother? Am I correct? However the dialogue is good. practise you need not... It is well. White Tiger Lilly ~^~@
Whitehair-Dogears 2005-11-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was cool! I likie! At first I couldn't tell who it was, but then I realized... NO DUH! Miroku and Kohaku! I'm such a ditz! Ja ne
Toboe'sBabe 2005-08-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was really good. I really liked it. Laterz.
Aya.Chaos 2005-07-19 ch 1,	abuseWTF! Who's talking to who its WAY!! to confusing!
Iggy - Essence of Angst 2005-05-18 ch 1,	abuseVery nice. This is the very dialogue-only based story I have read, and it flows very smoothly. I've often wondered how a conversation between Miroku and Sango would go (other than May's interpretation of it) and it's nice to see your perspective on it. A lot of fans believe that Sango would choose Kohaku over Miroku, and it's understandable, yet Miroku must feel frustrated at times. I look forward to seeing more works from you, Aino-chan!
Mossy Tea 2005-04-13 ch 1,	abuseWow, that was so well written! I could see them so clearly in my mind, facial expressions and all-(once I figured out who was who). Great job!
pangie-06 2005-04-06 ch 1,	abusecool. heh, I got it about halfway through, it's really good. I like how Kohaku and Miroku talk things out, and Kohaku seems really in character...I mean what sibling would want that much attention from the other? It's really cute too. ^_^ Well, ja ne! Thanks for the story!
Rachel 2005-01-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis story waz a little confusing but when u said it was Miroku & Kohaku it maid sense. U should write another 1 but haveing it say who is saying what. Please write back telling me what u thought of my idea and if u will use it. Yours truely, Rachel
Pg-chan 2004-12-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseKahaha~ I figured it out halfway through; good show~ :3 A friend of mine directed me to your fics earlier in the evening, and as you can probably tell by the reviews, I've been making my way through your work. Another wonderful in-n-out fic, simple and sweet. And I'll admit, I had never thought about how Kohaku and Miroku would interact. The one thing I am honestly not at all sure about in that series is whether Kohaku will be allowed to live in the end.
Kagome_Rulez 2004-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abusetoo lazy to sign in. anyway, LOVE IT! the writing style sure keeps ya guessing until about half way through.
Jezunya (too lazy to log in... 2004-11-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseHee, very nice :) I got that it was Miroku from the beginning (just 'cause of how he talks... he's so proper compared to everyone else ^_^), but i didn't realize it was Kohaku until almost the end. Very well written and a refreshing idea - since, you know, you are right.. no one writes about Kohaku and Miroku Anyway, i liked it! ^_^
gypsymuse 2004-11-03 ch 1,	abuseApologies? I'm purring like a neko-youkai over here! :) I love the idea of Miroku and Kohaku talking together of Sango's importance in both their lives, and think you pulled it off very nicely indeed. Thank you for significantly improving my mood on a rather gloomy day.
Banana Rum 2004-11-03 ch 1,	abuseHm. I was trying to figure out who Miroku was talking to the whole time, and I still coudln't figure out. I felt ever so pathetic when you said is was Kohaku, because then it made perfect sense. ^^; For a dialogue-based story, it was top notch, but it's not as good as the other things you've written. The description and metaphorical tenses you use in non-dialogue are what make your writing that few steps above the rest of the fray. It was still very nice, though. Miroku was totally in character and since I didn't know it was Kohaku until the very, I'm not sure if he was in character or not. I don't know very much about Kohaku, because half the time he was "Yes, master Naraku"-ish. Thank you for updating more frequently now. It gives me something to read and makes it all the more pleasing.
Leni 2004-11-03 ch 1,	abuseSweet. Kohaku being annoyed at Sango's protectiveness sounds right.
BatmanSwiss 2004-11-03 ch 1,	abuseVery interesting. It's definately good, though. I was a bit puzzled over WHO was speaking, but when you said the names at the end (I won't give it away), everything fell into place and it made sense. Good for a dialogue-only fic!! =D

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