SEQUEL! please...?
Jean!? You call yourself a telepath? tut-tut...
BTW I can't believe I'm actually sympathetic towards Amara, I never really took to her before (although her powers are really cool).
Sequel? you /know/ you want to *charming grin* please...

Interesting. Interesting and good.

...? Where's the rest?
Was this meant to be a one-shot?
Anyways, great work! Very intriguing, well-written...
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neat story. i don't usually read slash but this was pretty good.

Brilliant awesome.

interresting start.
jean is one of my fav' x-women.
keep writing

I like it. I like it a lot!

Ah, wonderful first chapter. Great descriptive qualities, excellent characterization - very believable, emotional without being overdone...I thoroughly enjoyed it. Can't wait to read more! :D

great story
can't wait for tbe next chap

OK I don't quite understand what is going on. Is this story suposed to show a mesn side of Jean and how she picks on everybody. That's what Im getting here butI'm not sure it is correct. I await your next chapter with curiosity.

While I'm not usually a fan of anything non-JOTT, I have to say that you're onto something here. While I encourage you to write this as you wish, if you are going to leave the JOTT out, please don't make it anti-JOTT.

Keep up the good work.

I'm with Fury...
Flesh it!
Flesh it!
Flesh it!
Oh, you'd make my authors' list if this is fleshed out without a Jott...but then again if its written well maybe with one. But,
Flesh It!
Flesh It!
Flesh It!
Flesh It!
Flesh It!
I Beg of you in the name of all that is good and holy.
FLESH IT!

I think you've got a great concept here - one you should definitely flesh out! There are so few fics out there that feature female-centric romances, and fewer still are the stories where Jean is used as a positive character *unless* she's paired up with Scott. (BO-RING!)
There's something to be said for a fresh, new perspective, and a unique idea - both, possibly, to be found in what you've got outlined. Count me among those who'd like to see the end result. ;)