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| wayhott4u 2006-12-22 ch 3,  | abuseLOVE THIS FIC! Please finish it, it'll be a shame if you don't it's beautifully written. |
| Gigi13 2006-08-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseUh-Oh Buffy's feeling all regetful. That can't be good for Angel's little family. But Val is cute and buys nice gifts, and more importantly, knows the value of cake. Good chapter, good chapter indeed. Glad you updated. |
| mendenbar 2006-08-16 ch 3, | abuseConflicting wishes? Or perhaps they will dovetail into real happiness later. How in the world did Buffy ever get into this situation with Angel (yes, I already understand the mechanics, I am referring to the possibility.) Look forward to more. |
| Serious Fan 2006-05-31 ch 2, | abuseI liked Buffy's regret and the way the little girl takes after Angel and Fred so much. I think its important to emphasize how close 'mother' and daughter are. |
| charmed-greek 2005-10-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseplease please please UPDATE! Im in love with this story! its great. please update soon! |
| Marcus S. Lazarus 2005-08-04 ch 2, | abuseIntriguing little number. True, your writing style needs a bit of improvement, but I do like your choice for the child's adopted mother; after Buffy, Fred's always been my favourite choice of a girlfriend for Angel. Anyway, keep up the good work! (Hope you won't take so long to update this time, by the way.) |
| Freezyboncoolipants 2005-07-09 ch 2, | abuseYay, an update! I'd almost began to give up hope. lol. This is really cute, and I'd like to see another chapter soon! That's a demand. lol. |
| Gigi13 2005-07-08 ch 2, | abuseValencia is still cute. And that's a very thoughtful gift she got her mother. Who wouldn't like a coloring book, especially one with words? She's smart. I bet Fred will be very happy with it. So the Buffster is peachy huh? There's only one thing that can lead too... I am liking this story. It's good. Hope you can find more words and update soon. |
| Freezyboncoolipants 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm adding this to my C2. lol. Coz I think it'll be a great story! I hope you update soon! |
| RageMore 2005-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseHm, Angel & Fred, together...not sure how I feel about that. Well Angel's yummy & Fred is a cutie, all sweet & intelectual, but I guess I never saw them together. Sounds like fun, must see how this turns out. More please, yes? |
| ReganX 2005-02-15 ch 1, | abuseI like what I've read so far. Are you planning on updating? Valencia is adorable. I love the way she's against sleep. Fred as the 'other woman' is definitely an interesting choice. It'd be hard for anyone to be mad at her, no matter what the circumstances and she makes a great mom. She's really sweet with Valencia. Her bedtime story was beautiful. |
| Mandy 2005-01-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseO! That's good! Can't wait for more. I love Frangel. (Cangel more, but Frangel is good). :D MORE MORE! :) |
| cloris 2004-12-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease continue! |
| LilY 2004-12-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG, Greatest Fred/Angel Story I love Fragel there isn't enough of them out there. I have to say Bravo, This story is coming out very good. I am saying this is all truth, It is very hard for me to read a story and write a review on it to say its good because there are mistakes and it just doesn't float my boat. Very Good! Hope to see a chapter Up. Always, LilY |
| BabeinBlue 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOh my God. There isn't enough Fred and Angel stories out there, and I'm glad I found this one. You should definately continue with this one. |