Wow, this is the first story that i've read that has Inari as a girl. most of them (mine included) refer the Inari as a guy. Kudos for you!

Hey there! I forgot to review this fic after readin it and my computer at home won't let me review it!

Anyways, I loved this story so much. Great job- though it was sad at the end! Anyways great!

Wow this is very good! It is definitly going on my favorites list! _ I'd love a longer chapter...

If you have to give twelve notes at the end of the chapter to explain yourself, then you're not really doing your job as a storyteller. Moreover, most of them are useless comments. Do we really NEED to know that you stole your character's weapon from another fandom because you thought it was cool?

If there's something you really want your readers to know at an exact moment of the story, show them through good narration. If you want something to be mysterious, don't yammer on about it in your notes. Good suspense should entice the reader, not be so vague that they have to flip through a guidebook to find out what you're talking about.

*jumps on Youko* Fox ears! *starts to rub his ears* Soft! _

O.O Wow Akira is great at math. _; Darn I shoulda got her to do my math homework. Then I woulda aced it. Oh well

Great chapter! Hehe I liked how it played out. Smooth Youko and it almost worked too. Anyways hope ya update soon again!

So u yell at your stories too huh? Alright I"m not the only one. My dad thinks I'm nuts when I try to write my fanfics (my computer gets the blunt of the beatings). Anyways great chapter and I'll be waitin for the next update!

FINALLY I CAN REVIEW! YES! I was holdin this in my inbox so I could remember to review asap. Wonderful fic so far. So once again her job changes. Glad I"m not an assassin- I would forget my job if I were to jump back and forth so much. I hope there's more 'cuz this is a really great fic- toned down or not!

Wonderful story! i LOVE it! i really really really hope you update soon! bye bye! ;-D

Wow great chapter. This is a wonderful fic. U should write more soon.

Wonderful chapter! I really liked this a lot. I have actually found a fic that has not been run into the ground. Yay! Cookies for u _

On to ch 2

_ Yay! You updated! Now what is going to happen? This is very interesting! Please update soon! P

You Stole my NAME!

That's all I have to say

Whoa, awesome...I can't wait until you update!