cool story!! please update soon!!

Good story it's rare to see a story from this angle with the characters. Keep up the good work.

Ho... scary... Hey! Are they gona met a Blade typ person? Or is it gona be all quiet and eire until knight fall? Like a horor move...

not half bad, i must say. one thing i will say, though; KEEP IT UP! i really enjoy it and i think it will be interesting to see what happens to Chrono and Rosette in this story. keep those ideas flowing!

wow this is coming along nicely.continue and update frequently.

Well, it was pretty good, you kinda left me on a cliffhanger there. Anyhow, the story line is good, but it could have used a bit more work. Maybe if you go back and fix it up a bit...
Besides that the story was excellent! I hope you add more soon, I want to see what happens!

WHAT A GOOD STORY!! PLZ UPDATE!

I loved it!:) Please write more, i want to know what happens next!

Well, there really isn't enough to it yet to give you effusive praise. But what you have is certainly promising. Since it's chapter 1, hopefully chapter 2 will be soon in coming. =)

That was good. I wonder which characters will love blossom for...

Sounds interesting. Nice clear style. Keep writing!

Ohh...great start. Because there wasn't enough writing to criticize you (not that I would) or praise you TOO much, I will say that you should write more. I hope I'm not asking too much of you, but do continue-I am very interested in this and will reply to every chapter,all right? Any way, keep up the good work and write more!