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| Kawaii Rin-chan 2007-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseI honestly don't see why this one-shot only has six reviews. I really don't, I mean compare to other fanfiction out there for Slayers, this has to be one of the betters one I stumble upon that had to deal with Zel and a little something with Lina. It's a wonderful piece, 'Nough said. Well, theres plenty to say, but it all just sums up to that. -Rin |
| Zuzanny 2006-11-26 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely done. :) |
| tharah 2005-01-13 ch 1, | abuseBeautifully written! You manage to capture emotions that anyone who has felt like an outcast, or felt simple loneliness can relate to. At the end you then capture the essence of true friendship. An action doesn't have to be large, instead a single touch and a simple gesture can do much. This is the kind of fic that will make me smile softly, and recall it's words long after reading. Well done, I hope to see more from you in the future! |
| Lina Gabriev 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet. I loved the way you wrote Zel's anguish and despair as he recalled his life after Rezo transformed him into a chimera. Very cute L/Z moment (especially the last line). |
| Kiadi 2004-11-05 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is really good. Anyone who has ever felt loneliness and regret (which is pretty much everybody) is going to associate with Zel beautifully here. I like the intereaction between Zel and Lina here, as well, and I think they were both very much in character. After all, just because this is a side of them you never see in the series, doesn't mean it isn't there. ^_^ |
| chalicity 2004-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY! not only was it cute, but it was awesomely in character (well... maybe not the crying part... but you made it work well) and also well-written! YAY for yuo, you get a birthday cookie! :D:D:D:D |
| Mysticalflame 2004-11-04 ch 1, anon. | abusesorry, i usually sign in, i'm just lazy. ^^; anyway, this was an absolute GREAT story. i'm a die-hard L/Z fan and this was great! i hope to see more from you! see ya! ~.^ |