Is this all you have? You can't just stop it here. Please, you must update it as soon as possible.

must have more

I enjoyed this chapter. I hope youv'e seen the newest episodes of "Tenchi Muyo." Tenchi's father is also part Juraian and he has an 80 year old daughter who looks like Tenchi's mother Kiyone. And Tenchi's grandmother, Airi is even more short-tempered than Akane. DON'T CALL HER GRANDMA!

This was a good chapter, but I don't think Tenchi would get angry so easily. Also, though I'm not an expert on martial arts, Japanese sword fighting involves more than just swinging a blade around and trying to hit someone. The sword is an extention of the arm, but the rest of the body is used as well. Also, there is very little resemblance between real sword fighting and a kendo match.

Good story, dude!

Interesting plot. It does not paint a very nice picture of the Juraiians. I hope you continue this just to see where it goes.

Interesting background. Good writing. Strong characterizations. I look forward to where you might take this in the future.

Thanks!
-- Pat

now this is VERY good man, PLZ UPDATE SOON!

i like it, plz plz plz update soon ^_^

Interesting start. Looking forward to more. Especially with the way you've introduced the Jurians (g).

Actually, I've been hoping for more of The Guardian since it first came out, thought it a good opening, and have been wondering on the direction you were going to take it.

As for RanmaX, well, did not care for it as much, but thoguht it ok, if too fast paced for my tastes.

Interesting story line. I am curious what happened to Ranma/Nabiki to lead them where they are now.
What of this involvement of the Jurians?
Who helped Ranma and why is he so afraid exactly?

I do hope you will update soon.

Who is Rommie?

...Dude...mutants are CELEBRATED IN JAPAN IN MARVEL CANNON!

Intruiging, I can't wait for more, please update as soon as you feel you are ready. Until next time keep up the good work.

O.o the Neko Ken can turn people into mutants?