 Breathe In Butterfly 2007-09-28 . chapter 1Brilliant! |
 I Write Tragedies 2005-03-08 . chapter 1Truthfully, I enjoyed the Author's Note more than the actual fic. I suppose it wasn't that bad, just a bit boring. Very well written nonetheless, just nothing happened that was surprising or all that interesting which set it apart from all the other fics I've read. |
 Friagabi 2005-03-06 . chapter 1 ''The light side won.'' --> lol, I still think that it was a win-win situation (assuming it was a state of war-crisis) ... I don't have to tell you again I love the cold beauty?!;)
Couldn't log in but now everything else works - THX!:) |
 XiaoGui 2005-02-28 . chapter 1Yeah, wonderful... now I'm sitting here in the office, crying.. Great. ;-)
Another wonderful story of yours, my dear. I admire your skills to give all these images form.
I'll add it to the C2... :-) |
 JakKat 2004-11-15 . chapter 1hm... i like it, i think- its kinda creepy. good writing style, i could see it playing in my head- but they weren't exactly in character, you know? maybe with different characters i would like it better... but all the same, good job. |
 HoVis 2004-11-06 . chapter 1Beautiful. |
 lucidity 2004-11-05 . chapter 1 DId Severus kill Lucius or did he die on his own?
This was very beautiful! I'd love to see a story where you explore this complicated friendship that Severus and Lucius had.
Your writing is so painfully beautiful.
Thanks for posting this! |
 Hyena Cub 2004-11-05 . chapter 1Wow...very chilling. Great very-short story! Kind of depressing, but good. The only thing I might mention is the very end...a biut abrupt, a bit distracting to the voerall mood of the piece. |
 Me 2004-11-04 . chapter 1 Oh my goodness! What wonderful descriptions! It was beautiful! I love it! |
 Silverthreads 2004-11-04 . chapter 1Absolutely stunning work! |
 AccioSeverus 2004-11-04 . chapter 1That was truly beautiful! You have a wonderful writing style, so very poetic!
Thanks for posting this lovely story! |
 Lilithakaducky 2004-11-04 . chapter 1Very sad and touching story.
Here in Switzerland we celebrate this day just the same. With visiting and remembering our families and friends who have passed away.
I have nothing against Halloween, but the amis pulled the original meaning quite out of poportions. |
 Oya 2004-11-04 . chapter 1Ok, so Severus came and took Lucius' soul away? Erm, he's not a ghost?
This is too good to be a one-shot. Wow. I love it. I would love if you made it into a longer story. ;)
WOW! |