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Reviews for: To a Land Far Away
Breathe In Butterfly
2007-09-28 . chapter 1
Brilliant!
I Write Tragedies
2005-03-08 . chapter 1
Truthfully, I enjoyed the Author's Note more than the actual fic. I suppose it wasn't that bad, just a bit boring. Very well written nonetheless, just nothing happened that was surprising or all that interesting which set it apart from all the other fics I've read.
Friagabi
2005-03-06 . chapter 1
''The light side won.'' --> lol, I still think that it was a win-win situation (assuming it was a state of war-crisis) ... I don't have to tell you again I love the cold beauty?!;)

Couldn't log in but now everything else works - THX!:)
XiaoGui
2005-02-28 . chapter 1
Yeah, wonderful... now I'm sitting here in the office, crying.. Great. ;-)

Another wonderful story of yours, my dear. I admire your skills to give all these images form.

I'll add it to the C2... :-)
JakKat
2004-11-15 . chapter 1
hm... i like it, i think- its kinda creepy. good writing style, i could see it playing in my head- but they weren't exactly in character, you know? maybe with different characters i would like it better... but all the same, good job.
HoVis
2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Beautiful.
lucidity
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
DId Severus kill Lucius or did he die on his own?

This was very beautiful! I'd love to see a story where you explore this complicated friendship that Severus and Lucius had.

Your writing is so painfully beautiful.

Thanks for posting this!
Hyena Cub
2004-11-05 . chapter 1
Wow...very chilling. Great very-short story! Kind of depressing, but good. The only thing I might mention is the very end...a biut abrupt, a bit distracting to the voerall mood of the piece.
Me
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness! What wonderful descriptions! It was beautiful! I love it!
Silverthreads
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
Absolutely stunning work!
AccioSeverus
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
That was truly beautiful! You have a wonderful writing style, so very poetic!

Thanks for posting this lovely story!
Lilithakaducky
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
Very sad and touching story.

Here in Switzerland we celebrate this day just the same. With visiting and remembering our families and friends who have passed away.

I have nothing against Halloween, but the amis pulled the original meaning quite out of poportions.
Oya
2004-11-04 . chapter 1
Ok, so Severus came and took Lucius' soul away? Erm, he's not a ghost?

This is too good to be a one-shot. Wow. I love it. I would love if you made it into a longer story. ;)

WOW!
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