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| John Westcott 2006-09-23 ch 1, | abusePersonally, I think Lee's entire downward slide, including him not wanting to be rescued after nearly suffocating in space, began when he destroyed the Olympic Carrier. It's clear that's been haunting him ever since and your fic clearly portrays that. An awesome story. |
| adafrog 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved the story. The only thing was that, and this is probably me being ignorant, but the Mark part was a bit confusing. Guessing here it's just a random name for plot purposes. But, really, I thought it was great. |
| Mady Bay 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAnother good one, Cyndi! |
| Ilene 2005-01-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseTypos aside, this was a great storyline. You really felt for Lee after he pulled the trigger. Great acting job! |
| PadawanMage 2004-11-10 ch 1, | abusePoor Lee. Trying to still be CAG and something simple as remembering a fellow pilot's name gets him reliving the shooting down of the Olympic Carrier...and the responsibility of what he had to do. |