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| ArodLoverus2001 2005-12-03 ch 39, | abuseLOL that was awesome! hope vaughn & syd r together again!! |
| Eyghon 2005-07-02 ch 39, | abusethat's a great ending! Bravo! |
| brenda-wood 2005-07-01 ch 39, | abuseIhave four words time for a sequel LOL bren |
| brenda-wood 2005-06-15 ch 37, | abuseI think laura is going to put them all to shame just a slight critique of the grammar and you are not the only one to do it so do not feel upset PLEASE a lot of places you say must of or may of like when slaone says may of recruited her into sd 6 in these instances it is have it is just that when we speak the have it 'sounds' like of- the 've sound should've could've may have must have its a small thing and I have no idea if english is your first language or not great fic and please keep me posted! brenda |
| brenda-wood 2005-06-08 ch 36, | abusewhat a mature question for such a little girl way to go now what willsyd say bren |
| brenda-wood 2005-06-03 ch 35, | abuseway to go laura Lol Brenda |
| freitazal 2005-06-02 ch 35, | abuseo! Like mother , Like daughter indeed , ha ha ha , i can“t wait for more ,please update soon. |
| brenda-wood 2005-05-25 ch 34, | abusewell that cat is out of the bag and waiitng for its dinner LOL good job |
| brenda-wood 2005-05-19 ch 33, | abuseI adored the mom syd chat and teh last sentence good work |
| vaughn is hot 2005-05-17 ch 32, | abusewhat a sweet chapter! glad irina's okay, this is getting pretty good, update soon! |
| brenda-wood 2005-05-13 ch 31, | abusei hope syd is there in time |
| brenda-wood 2005-05-06 ch 30, | abusea talk alone with irina I sense a dead body LOL bren |
| vaughn is hot 2005-05-05 ch 30, | abuseoh this is getting good! |
| brenda-wood 2005-05-03 ch 29, | abuseGO SYD I loved jacks fast reaction brenda |
| vaughn is hot 2005-04-28 ch 29, | abuseGREAT chapter! i loved it, i loved they olivia sydney interaction. update soon |