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ArodLoverus2001
2005-12-03
ch 39,
abuseLOL that was awesome! hope vaughn & syd r together again!!
Eyghon
2005-07-02
ch 39,
abusethat's a great ending! Bravo!
brenda-wood
2005-07-01
ch 39,
abuseIhave four words

time for a sequel

LOL

bren
brenda-wood
2005-06-15
ch 37,
abuseI think laura is going to put them all to shame

just a slight critique of the grammar and you are not the only one to do it so do not feel upset PLEASE

a lot of places you say must of or may of like when slaone says may of recruited her into sd 6

in these instances it is have it is just that when we speak the have it 'sounds' like of- the 've sound

should've could've may have must have

its a small thing and I have no idea if english is your first language or not

great fic and please keep me posted!

brenda
brenda-wood
2005-06-08
ch 36,
abusewhat a mature question for such a little girl

way to go

now what willsyd say

bren
brenda-wood
2005-06-03
ch 35,
abuseway to go laura

Lol

Brenda
freitazal
2005-06-02
ch 35,
abuseo! Like mother , Like daughter indeed , ha ha ha , i can“t wait for more ,please update soon.
brenda-wood
2005-05-25
ch 34,
abusewell that cat is out of the bag and waiitng for its dinner

LOL

good job
brenda-wood
2005-05-19
ch 33,
abuseI adored the mom syd chat and teh last sentence

good work
vaughn is hot
2005-05-17
ch 32,
abusewhat a sweet chapter! glad irina's okay, this is getting pretty good, update soon!
brenda-wood
2005-05-13
ch 31,
abusei hope syd is there in time
brenda-wood
2005-05-06
ch 30,
abusea talk alone with irina

I sense a dead body

LOL

bren
vaughn is hot
2005-05-05
ch 30,
abuseoh this is getting good!
brenda-wood
2005-05-03
ch 29,
abuseGO SYD

I loved jacks fast reaction

brenda
vaughn is hot
2005-04-28
ch 29,
abuseGREAT chapter! i loved it, i loved they olivia sydney interaction. update soon
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