fluff sucks ;) but this is twisted you did want it twisted right? um, right? runs away screaming because whoever wrote this is chasing her/him/it/a cat

YOU KILLED GEORGE! HOW COULD YOU! WHAT DID HE EVER DO TO YOU! *startes to cry*

Very twisted, nicely done. Alanna is rather slutty in this fic, I must say. Also, I don't think Gary of Raoul would have kissed her right there... Think about it. You're a girl, and your best friend is a girl (let's just assume, I gonna bet that there aren't a whole lotta guys reading T.P. fanfics) Then, she tells you that... *GASP* She's a guy. So would you really be like, wow, and start making out with her/him? I don't think so. Point made. Anyways, I like your story. Haha! George got killed by a...BUCKET! *Cracking up* Good Job

Chopstix*

*staring, shocked*

1 hour later

Okie! Time to go read the next Tortall's Twin story!

*death glares Jon* 'Scuze me? WhaT ON EARTH DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING?

*panting* Okie, I was just speaking *cough, cough* with Jonathan. I won't hyperventilate.

*mutters curses in K'miri*

Of course I recognized the deja vu! I'm a crazy Tamora Pierce Fan! See? *points at name*

WHAT?

Ooooo, that is interesting...

Blah blah blah.. bliddy bloo bla! Grr 'n Bah! Bah bug 'n hum! ahhh! Hey that was good! :) hehe

Wow! Talk about surprise! OKay I've reviewed like all your chapters.. I think I'm becoming one of those annying reviewers that has to review every two seconds.. uhoh!

-Kylee

Yay! I love Gary! I always wanted them to get together..kinda. Okay I'm not TOO mad that you killed George.. but I really liked him! Couldn't you have just let her hate him instead of killing him off? *sigh* Oh well! Anyone who reads this review please take time to read my fics (only two really stupid ones I wrote awhile ago!) Okay byes!

-Kylee

Nooooooooooooooooo! You killed George! How could you? Wahhh! Even though I throughly enjoyed this chapter I am just still in shock!

-Kylee

How sad that George died, but I liked the end result...I would have liked to see some evil Jonathan though...This was well written, I like how everything fit together, the way Alanna became a knight, producing a similar ending to the book :)

This is a great story. I am now going to read part two. Thanks for your wonderful idea.

Good story. You've done a good job, but it seemed really familiar. No offense, I really liked it, but it seemed to me that 95% of your story was TP's.

Neat story. I read some of your debates on Alanna the Lioness' website. I like your ideas about what could have happened.