Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Time Turned Back The Prisoner of Azkaban - Page 1 of 33
TxA-GunFighter
2009-10-29 . chapter 15
Hope this gets finidhed.

gunny
MadlyInLoveWithTokioHotel
2009-09-20 . chapter 11
GO HUMP A BASALISK!! haha! i love it! i actually laughed out loud at that one. My auntie looked at me like i was insane... XD
RivierRose
2009-09-01 . chapter 14
Can there be a two way path. like one person do one path way and another do the othe path

-reply to HOWL FO THE IRISH MOON
sjrodgers108
2009-06-08 . chapter 15
hello, just found this story, please come back and write more of this story please come back soon loved it so far more please
Risked
2009-05-24 . chapter 2
This chapter is slightly off, mainly because you weren't able to keep the Dursleys in character.

They're rejection for magic should be absolute since you have chosen to stay with the original story line, despite time traveling. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Risked
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
Very interesting though I do not believe that Snape should ever "shrug."

The chapter itself is a very good hook, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
tar heels superstar
2009-05-20 . chapter 14
good story so where is this story continued and i can't wait.
DragonFire Princess
2009-05-19 . chapter 15
Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP!
Chinese Detective
2009-04-23 . chapter 14
You write very good stories, but they're always so short.
Asilem Dlanod
2009-04-05 . chapter 12
okay, I'm a bit of a geology freak so I must comment on the gems.

Amethyst is a type of quartz, SiO(sub)2, and is essentially very, very boring. Mainly because it's incredibly common. So for "rare" it doesn't work so well. Perhaps you should modify it with a "-colored" so it's just an amethyst-colored stone.

Peridot is the gemstone-quality variety of olivine (a magneisum or iron-bearing silicate), which is formed at rather high temperatures. Thus, I'm not entirely certain if forming at the heart of a dead animal is entirely appropriate. Also, it really wouldn't make sense unless it's a fossilization, since peridot is, by definition, inorganic. Oh, and peridot is ALWAYS green, not violet. In fact, violet isn't a possible color for olivine (which can include yellow, brown, white, and black, depending on the content). So you might wanna thing about it.

So, that was the geologist nitpickyness. I'm still enjoying the story nevertheless. There's some typos that I catch here and there, but mostly it's fairly easy to read past them.
*continues reading*
Hedwig Edwiges
2009-04-04 . chapter 11
Up until now Dumbledore isn't being a bastard.
LadyBluePheonix
2009-03-25 . chapter 15
i LOVE THIS STORY. uPDATE Soon.
Fire Fan
2009-01-21 . chapter 14
Pretty Good so far but I have spotted a few errors. 1) you seem to be switching between Shadow and Hunter when referrng to Harry's Marauder name. 2)It's Ku KLUX Klan. 3) Dobby dropped a pudding not a cake. 4) It's spelled Apothecary. 5) Check your grammer. 6)Its Griffon not Gryffin.
MoonPrincess623
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
To see a world in a grain of sand...that was in a movie i once saw. This is great! I can't wait to finish this. I hope there are more!
Angel Smith
2009-01-05 . chapter 1
Dear knightblazer85!

Recently I have read your fanfic "Time Turned Back The Prisoner of Azkaban", and I want to say that it is really great! Thank you very much for writing it! my opinion.

Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language and publish it on Fanrus website ( /fanf/)? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Also, all the additional information (like your email or website) can be published, if you wish.

Thank you once again for your wonderful work!

Angel Smith
Return to Top