 TxA-GunFighter 2009-10-29 . chapter 15Hope this gets finidhed.
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 MadlyInLoveWithTokioHotel 2009-09-20 . chapter 11GO HUMP A BASALISK!! haha! i love it! i actually laughed out loud at that one. My auntie looked at me like i was insane... XD |
 RivierRose 2009-09-01 . chapter 14 Can there be a two way path. like one person do one path way and another do the othe path
-reply to HOWL FO THE IRISH MOON |
 sjrodgers108 2009-06-08 . chapter 15hello, just found this story, please come back and write more of this story please come back soon loved it so far more please |
 Risked 2009-05-24 . chapter 2This chapter is slightly off, mainly because you weren't able to keep the Dursleys in character.
They're rejection for magic should be absolute since you have chosen to stay with the original story line, despite time traveling. Otherwise, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 Risked 2009-05-24 . chapter 1Very interesting though I do not believe that Snape should ever "shrug."
The chapter itself is a very good hook, and I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
 tar heels superstar 2009-05-20 . chapter 14good story so where is this story continued and i can't wait. |
 DragonFire Princess 2009-05-19 . chapter 15Love the story, Hope you'll update ASAP! |
 Chinese Detective 2009-04-23 . chapter 14You write very good stories, but they're always so short. |
 Asilem Dlanod 2009-04-05 . chapter 12okay, I'm a bit of a geology freak so I must comment on the gems.
Amethyst is a type of quartz, SiO(sub)2, and is essentially very, very boring. Mainly because it's incredibly common. So for "rare" it doesn't work so well. Perhaps you should modify it with a "-colored" so it's just an amethyst-colored stone.
Peridot is the gemstone-quality variety of olivine (a magneisum or iron-bearing silicate), which is formed at rather high temperatures. Thus, I'm not entirely certain if forming at the heart of a dead animal is entirely appropriate. Also, it really wouldn't make sense unless it's a fossilization, since peridot is, by definition, inorganic. Oh, and peridot is ALWAYS green, not violet. In fact, violet isn't a possible color for olivine (which can include yellow, brown, white, and black, depending on the content). So you might wanna thing about it.
So, that was the geologist nitpickyness. I'm still enjoying the story nevertheless. There's some typos that I catch here and there, but mostly it's fairly easy to read past them.
*continues reading* |
 Hedwig Edwiges 2009-04-04 . chapter 11Up until now Dumbledore isn't being a bastard. |
 LadyBluePheonix 2009-03-25 . chapter 15i LOVE THIS STORY. uPDATE Soon. |
 Fire Fan 2009-01-21 . chapter 14Pretty Good so far but I have spotted a few errors. 1) you seem to be switching between Shadow and Hunter when referrng to Harry's Marauder name. 2)It's Ku KLUX Klan. 3) Dobby dropped a pudding not a cake. 4) It's spelled Apothecary. 5) Check your grammer. 6)Its Griffon not Gryffin. |
 MoonPrincess623 2009-01-05 . chapter 1To see a world in a grain of sand...that was in a movie i once saw. This is great! I can't wait to finish this. I hope there are more! |
 Angel Smith 2009-01-05 . chapter 1Dear knightblazer85!
Recently I have read your fanfic "Time Turned Back The Prisoner of Azkaban", and I want to say that it is really great! Thank you very much for writing it! my opinion.
Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language and publish it on Fanrus website ( /fanf/)? I will state everywhere that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Also, all the additional information (like your email or website) can be published, if you wish.
Thank you once again for your wonderful work!
Angel Smith |