that is just so beautiful... =)

Interesting. The grammar and sentence structure is ok, so that's not what you have to work on. Perhaps make it a bit longer with less sap concentrated in so little a space?
And btw, I agree with you about the travesty that was the last US Presidential Election day. A good thing that I don't live there.

This is by far the best thing I've seen from you so far. Wonderfully done, my dear. :)