Oooooo...creepy! *rubs hands together evilly* And it has my Raynay...MORE! Please?

i really enjoyed this but wheres chapter 3? :)

YES KILL SANDOVAL! I would read the next part just to see that. It was good both parts.

Can't wait to read chapter 3!

This is interesting! More please!

I like it! You have quite an interesting plot happening here, and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I hope that you post more soon!