This was a really nice story but your title made me confused. I thought that there would be more action and adventure in this story because of the title. Also, with the prologue and the powers that they had. I'm not saying that this is a horibble story, I thought the love between Merle and Rafer was adorable, but I wish there could have been more. Keep up the good work.

i found this link on the profile in your Fictionpress account and i fell in love with it! It's such a beautiful story. It makes me all warm and fuzzy! YAY!

it was beautiful

i love this story, even though it isnt a story that i would usually read(though secretly i love them and think they are the best in the world!! dont tell my friends, it would ruin my tough, tomboy reputation!!lol)
i think that it was well structured and that the characters were well portrayed?(is that the right word)
well anyway wat i was trying to say is that you should keep up the good work, i have read aanother of your stories and you are a brilliant writer
kepp up the good work
luv annon

wow, that was really good!
i didn't know that you had written another story after Love and Magic, and i loved it.
I was just wondering, how does this one fit after love and Magic? I know that it is set in that same place, but i didn't recognise any of the characters. Maybe that was because it has been ages sice i read Love and Magic...
booky

hi. i read your most recent story, and decided to read this one too.. it's a really good storyline, as usual, but PLEASE check your spelling! it's break, not brake, marrying, not marring. it changes the meaning altogether if you have spelling errors. and it's really annoying in a good fanfiction. but all in all... this is good. :)

I love it, and this is my second time reading it, i just have to add it to my favorite stories list so i can go off and read your other stories!

Omigod! This is SO great! I mean, I've only read like four chapters but I LOVE IT! The only thing that might be difficult ofr me is the changing POV but other than that keep writing and I will look for more stories like this one!

LOVELY story, future writer...i wish i had all that imagination and creativity to create such wonderful stories. Plot might need to be more clear though... still its a spectacular story!

THIS IS REALLY GOOD!i mean really good, ur an awesome writer!1keep up the great work!

You like really long endings, don't you? =)

Sigh. that was so romantic.

AH!

CLAVIE!!

That was so cute!!

Hey, question, would your fanfiction change if you based it on what you know of Twilight?

Love Kat.

I posted this on mcbc, but thank you Clavie for the wonderful ending :), even though the first one was good too, this was so sweet, love how Rafer sung so that they could dance.

that's it? no. but it was very good. it's on my favorites now. but almost all your stories are. so no doubt about it now huh? lol I await your other stories^^

~Dani