*sighs wistfully* ah, such talent! keep writing please. do something for Arwen since uv already done my fave guys. (legolas, aragorn, and faramir)
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All of these are really good! I love how they all sort of interweave (is that even a word?) with each other... very good.

One thing though; in the first poem, "The Last Alliance", the repetition of "There were some, who resisted!" became almost invisible and less powerful by the time you reached the middle of the poem. If maybe you put "There were some, who resisted!" after every three paragraphs, instead of one, it would be more effective (unless it was your intention for it not to be very noticable). All the other poems work well with it after one paragraph, though.

Well, that's just my opinion ;). Great poems all around. Good job!

-lordoftheringsfanficreader

I LOVE these poems. To me they completely encapsulate the spirit of the characters, and the story as a whole. Are you going to continue?