Wow, Marty's a jerk to Skippy.

I like this. Irs really cool writing
To mix up the two guys like that.
really cool.
Leigh

I like this. Irs really cool writing
To mix up the two guys like that.
really cool.
Leigh

You should learn how Marty reacts to situations. This is not the way he acts...at all. Marty doesn't even curse that much, only a few times.

This is heavy (hint hint)
you don't know how to do Marty's character
and the 'I'm only 19 line'? whats up with that Marty McFly is 17!! and I don't think the people on Family ties or BttF would use the 'F' word (even though you censored it i was still offened me) the worst word i've heard on BttF was sh*t and the worse word I've heard on Family Ties was damn (Deap sigh) next time you want to write a fanfic watch the movie or show youe writing about and study the characters character:( Great scott!! that was just wreched

Wow, Marty is psychic! He knew about Bon Jovi, MTV, and Richard Nixon WAY before his time! Awesome.

Or...not.

http://www.theonion.com/onion3738/now_more_than_ever.html

a bit boring if you ask me and that does not sound like that is really how marty reacts to situations and even though you can't hear him it doesn't sound like how he would be in the movie