I have to admit, it's pretty decent. I was a bit disappointed when you didn't delve further into how their relationship developed but then I discovered you included a deeper history into the on they already have (It's pretty safe to say you haven't read the manga while writing this) so that made sense.

At first, it wasn't anything impressive. Entertaining, humorous, yes, but not really something that leaves a lasting impression...until the end. It was beautifully executed. Not the end chapter per se but the last few words. You were right when you said every word counts and those last four ones sure did leave an imprint on me.

I like the idea of how you wrote through a series of their whole lives together and then ended with an emotional flashback sort of, and like I said, the ending was perfect.

Haha, I don't usually review before the last chapter, but this one really made me laugh: "Meet me at my dive. Signed Mr Horse." The horse bit really cracked me up, and I love their characters now, the un military kind, although it is kind of hard to imagine Riza randomly hugging him, but I found it very endearing. :-) Looking forward to your next update.

This stry iz awesum! UPDATE!

Just kidding ^.~

You know I love this story.

Nyaa!^^ So cute and dunno, smexy and well, cute^^U

Really love it, awesome in-character portrair!

-Gabs.

Wow. Fabulous. Insightful. Msrvellous. (Insert another few adjectives describing how great this piece is!) Brilliant.

This was quite simply a marvellous piece. From the dialogue which was spot on, to the description of events past and present, the character motivations intricately woven into canon and out of your imagination, the deft and sure plotting and craftsmanship. Well Done! I greatly enjoyed this, and will be marking this as a favourite to come back to! I am also hopeful then when I click on your homepage, that a few more pieces of this standard will be waiting for me to savour. Oh and as an aside, while I can appreciate your point of view re: more Royai in the series, I do feel that a bit more could have been included without cause for concern. and more could have definiely been added to the movie!

I dont get the ending. what was they doing in the fist place. please e mail me back cause i want to know

this story is with absolutely sure one of the most beautiful things i've ever read , and i must thank you so much for her ! you just made me happy , sad , emotional, angry , teary .. and all the others emotions altogheter. congratulations for the lovely story

And especially this part:
"Seven years, it had been, almost to the day. Seven years of luck, of honesty and of friendship, of knowing he was never alone or unwanted or unappreciated—there was nothing in the world he would have traded that for."

I love that. It makes me feel all warm and bubbly inside.

This is wonderful =] Maybe it's just me, but this fic seems like a circle: the ending goes back to the begining, and it all makes sense no matter where I start because I'll always end up where I started, feeling... satisfied. Great job.

I greatly enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it. After the horrible day I've had I needed it.

One of the best ROYAI fanfic I've ever read! :D

Good work! :D

Coty
(cotylog.

PS: I want a transcription of the Xmas tape!! :P

This is one of the most enjoyable romance stories I've ever read and I don't like reading romantic stories unless its part of a humor or a action/adventure fic.

I really enjoyed reading this.

Best wishes for your future writing.

Goodness me! This is so wonderful. The royai... oh my. No words for how lovely. You are a fabulously talented writer!

That was fabulous. One of the best fics I've read. Keep up the good work.

This was a wonderful story full of thoughtfuness and creativity. You made me look at Roy and Riza'a relationship in a whole new light. Although I have always thought that they are in love, I would never expect them to be intimate at times (until after the TV series). You bring a sense of reality to the possibility that they really could have a romantic relationship going on behind the scenes.

Do they or do they not for real? Who knows? But I sure have enjoyed your version of their story. An excellent work of fiction. :)