This was so neat! I like the fact that Zach was using Foresight to cheat, even though it didn't always work. Good Job!!

Want to write a bit more? Perhaps explain a couple things? Like why a companion was on earth at least i assume that's where this is taking place.

*laughing* That was funny! Are you gonna do more? No rush for anything. Have a nice day! ^-^

-Storm Queen

nice i like this one it will be interting wright more plz

-sam

this is a good story but last time i checked haven didn't have tv or video games. good job though and u better update other stories soon i can't wait to read them.

A good start here if you are thinking about continuing. However, in Valdemar there are no televisions, video games, computers or aluminum cans. Gifted mind healers rather than councilors or psychiatrists. No colleges that offered degrees. Make those changes and you'll have something that would fit right in ML's Valdemar universe.

YAY! More Zach! I missed Zach. Please update Zach.
Oh, and good luck with your NaNo novel. I signed up too, and promptly began reading fanfiction to procrastinate. :) Pwease, more Zach soon!

*laughs* I love it! Absolutely love it. But it's late and I'm tired so that's about all I can type, hehe. Nicely done!
~Lydia

...this made me giggle! Good one-shot, and I can't wait for CTD so I can write the NEXT chapter! -grin, huge, BROAD hint-

Aw... very, very nice... >^-^<

~etcetera-cat

hehehe. Gotta love the resignation at the end.

*sigh* Just get on my back. *snickersnort*