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| kyakaytoneroko 2008-05-29 ch 2, | abuseI LUV YOUR STORY...PLEASE IF YOU MAY CAN YOU WRITE MORE?? |
| LordKcayrynsLover 2006-03-11 ch 2, | abuseWow.. Ya know... writer's block totally sucks. Great work on the dialouge thing. Soo... The chapters seem short. I know, I have this problem too. Other than that, it's pretty good. |
| yllom21 2006-02-18 ch 2, | abuseInteresting, I wonder how Kouga will take the news when he finds out? Interesting, and nice plot. You could be more descriptive though. |
| isthisparadise 2005-11-11 ch 2, | abusethis is good |
| Yasha Gurl 2005-01-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseAwesome story!I like how u mixed Inuyasha and wolves!Maybe u could make Inuyasha Fall in love with a wolf! |
| Tsuki Fox 2005-01-26 ch 2, | abuseI like the story. I'm also slightly new to Inu Yasha but so far you seem to be on target. - tail flips- I hope you do continue and don't let w.b. get you down. The story is really good. P.S. w.b. = writers block |
| Inu-Shinta 2005-01-26 ch 2, | abuseI like this story very much. After reading it I tried to picture Inuyasha in an outfit like Kouga's, but the image just wouldn't focus, so to speak. |
| GirlLoki 2005-01-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseUPDATE! |
| A Life of Rules is No Fun 2005-01-06 ch 2, | abuseggod second chapter! glad to finally see the second one up. hope to see more asap! ~Darkfire~ |
| AmberFox and Lyell 2004-12-29 ch 2, | abuseUpdate SON! (That's a lot of O's!)Please! I don't think I can stand the suspence! Dose Inu's hair go grayish? What's Kouga going to say? How will his friends find out? Whats Sesshoumaru going to say?! Just thinking about it makes me giggle like a girly! |
| Lady Hirogashi 2004-12-28 ch 2, anon. | abusei love your story it's so cool!please continue writing! |
| AngelSachiya 2004-12-27 ch 2, | abuseOh god please let it something good! It's relly good so far. Update soon |
| ChiEfSqUatTinGquAiL (not si... 2004-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseaha!! Wolf of the Frozen Flame, I knew that you would do something like this! the tetsuseiga was made out of inuyasha's fathers fang, it was forged only for inuyasha and cannot be touched by anyone with demon blood, also only a half demon can make it transform. ps inuyasha could never be a wolf demon because no matter what, until the end, he hates them with a passion. |
| A Life of Rules is No Fun 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abusetruely amazing so far! so suspenseful! cant wait for the next chapter. oh yea, where's the little kitsune, Shippo? or will he come later? aim - Hieipyromaster ~Darkfire~ |
| LordKcayrynsLover 2004-11-05 ch 1, | abuseNice, a new take on things... perfect to set off a story! Keep it up! You should have a bit less diaouge, in my opinion, but that's okay. |