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roses in bloom 2/14/07 . chapter 3
Ooh! I'm intrigued, I'm intrigued! You know, these chapter are *far* too short... I'm always really sad whenever I reach the end of the page. Lovely work, though!

Can't wait for the update!
cherry fantasy 7/14/06 . chapter 3
Wow I really like this fic, you did some awesome job so far ! YAY for Sano/Ken ! _

Please, you just HAVE to update, for the sake of my already declining sanity ! ;; I really can't wait to read more !
Random reader 8/26/05 . chapter 3
Hello. Just a quick correction for you: sessha is actually Japanese for 'this unworthy one'. So when you use it you should use it as if you're saying that.

i.e. You should be saying 'sessha truly apologises', because Kenshin is actually talking about himself vaguely in the third person. Because 'this unworthy one truly apologise' is bad grammar.

Just a thought! Other than that, your writing is quite good. Good luck.
VyxenSkye 8/26/05 . chapter 3
Good story, I love it tonz! Cuteness fluff, made me go "aw..." You must update again soon, i'll be looking forward to it!

Ja ne!
mini-kero 8/23/05 . chapter 2
woah! KenSano luving ROCKS *_* I beg you to write more of this! Longer chapters (please?) you're so funny; I like your author's notes XP KisSes & ChoColAte 4 yA!
Kenshin's Soul 8/18/05 . chapter 2
My friend, Starrose, told me about your fic and I went to read it! It's so cute! I'm looking forward to read some more of them! _

I love how you write your fic. It's so much better than mine. I'm good with imagination but poor at writing. ;;

Keep it up!
StarRose 8/18/05 . chapter 2
O, i SO like the way this is going, adding to favs so i can keep track of it _
StarRose 8/18/05 . chapter 1
XD I LOVE this first chapter! And i rather like Kenshin being called a whore ;) hehehehee! (cos he is _) XD

Reading on!
doreida 7/12/05 . chapter 2
Nya...

I should have reviewed chapter one, perhaps, instead of just jumping straight to chapter two but whatever. Let's just say I gave up on this story -ever- being updated after seeing when it was published... thank God for the reincarnation of old obsessions, ne?

This truly is an... amusing story. But then, AUs almost always tend to be. I LOVE how you kept calling Kenshin "angel" and "it" in the first few paragraphs of chapter two. It just made me smile. From chapter one the must-love moment would be the last few paragraphs. Basically from the part about the landlady shouting to the beautiful, "Oh...fuck."
Risk-Master 4/22/05 . chapter 2
Good job! I'm liking the darkness...keep it up, no?

Yes. Keep it up.

Took ya a while...;;

Chocolate
Tandakku 4/21/05 . chapter 2
I've been waiting so long for you to update this... - Joy joy joy! I love this chapter!

Wonder if Kenshin is gonna kill him... o.o

Please continue, this was an awesome chapter!
Rhiannon3j 4/21/05 . chapter 2
*bounces* Can we have white chocolate macadamia cookies next? _

"his battle with hisego was just the beginning."

I'm unfamiliar with the word "hisego"... hiself, maybe?

_ Yay! Update! *poke*
Rhiannon3j 1/30/05 . chapter 1
I like it so far... and your torturing our favorite redhead, even better! It would be a shame if you didn't update (hint hint)
bootleg 11/7/04 . chapter 1
great start! i can almost feel the pent-up sadness Sano has. and the whole running away thing - wonderful. :cuddles Sano plushie: please continue! don't see too many yaoi these days. it'd be interesting to see how this one turns out!
Risk-Master 11/6/04 . chapter 1
Hey, I like it. You've got some grammar problems, that's for sure, but still...you've got a good plot.

UPDATE! Please?
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