Well, sorry to pop your bubble, but I would truly love to read more about that incredible story of yours!

Bless all of Halloween's candies, all rainy days and all your truly wonderful weirdness for this piece of Heaven! And, truly, I'm being serious.

Nice to meet you, first of all. Name's Nicor Warg-Fyrweorm, as you have already seen, but you can call me Nicor . That, by the way, means "sea creature". So, I love water, and it includes rain!

Okay, time to get back to some soaked earth . I can say, truly seriously, that I LOVE YOUR STORY. Yes, with capital letters.

And, even if it bothers you, I would die to know about other people. We know about Netto and Saito, Shuuko and Aquaman -Rain- (Beutiful name, by the way. Can't stand the image of a cute little human Aquaman, though XD I want to hug him!) and Saloma, Woodman, Daisuke and Quickman. By the way, Quickman's also human-like? 'Cause you said he was "Quick" now... I imagine him that way

And we also know that Meiru, Yaito, Higure, Haruka and, I think, Roll, Glyde and Numberman, are not accounted for. Oh, and we also got Forte in there! I really love that guy... Always cool, even in warm rain XD

For what you've said, I think, and hope, than Enzan and Hikai-hakase are still safe and sound. Hope Blues' too. So it would be wonderful if you could write something akin to another chapter. Not to put preasure or anything, but just to know about them. Like an epilogue-like chapter, if you want.

You know, no matter how much I want to read anything, I also know how hard it is to write and, even if people are trying to motivate you, it could be preassuring sometimes. So, don't worry. Doesn't matter what you'll do, because I'll be always here, even if its just to enjoy your story by re-reading it it I got it memorized. And, even then, I'll continue to come to read it again. Just for the pleasure of doing so and knowing that I still remember it right.

I know I've already said it, but I love your story. And, know what? Its also raining here, and the weather's warm. So, it helps to make that story a lot more real, just sitting by and hearing the rain on the window, singing an always changing soft lullaby to all of those who still have the heart to stop by and cast their eyes to the sky, just like Forte. I envy him right now, being able to stand in the rain...

But, I'm starting to lose myself again. Son't worry, it's something normal in me XP

Even so, I'm so glad I could read your story and, believe it or not, be able to write it for you... I feel just like being able to get a letter to a famous writer or something XD Pretty big bad and wondering imagination of mine, always working non-stop.

Honoured to meet you and always yours,

Nicor Warg-Fyrweorm

Eh? What's this? An abandoned one-shot? I don't suppose I could convince you to write more? Pretty please?

It was wonderful, the mood and themes in the story hooked me. Not to mention the plot is intriguing and could easily become a longer fic. You're a talented writer and considering that it's been a little over three years since this was written, I'll bet you're even better now.

Even though I know it's a long (long, long, very long) shot, I'm asking you to continue.

This is great! I kinda like seeing a fic where the "good guys" lose every once and a while. It would be fun to see what Blues is like. I hope you do more of this sometime.

Oh, my, god... I am looking at the world's greatest writter, it has to be! would you look at the consruction of the sentences? Oh, please... I begging you become an author... I'll read everything! Please the talent... to die for...

I enjoyed reading this. The situation is intruiging (sp?), and the characterisations are good. The theme of rain is interesting, and adds a mood to the story that works well.

I'm not going to ask you to continue it; it's your choice, and since you have more than two reviewers encouraging continuation I'm not going to hold my breath for another chapter. But if you were to write one, the vague story of how the separation occurred would probably want expanding on - it seems very much a plot device to facilitate the AU situation, and could be developed by adding to the character of the villian (you give almost no description to him, which makes the whole story seem rather forced). I agree that a different perspective would be a good way to continue this, unless you want to write an epic about it all...

Well done, this is a good piece of writing.

Mako

Hey, more than two ppl have reviewed and wanted more...and i'm here to make it 8...MORE MORE! ;

you must continue! plz? its so intersting and theres not enough fics w/ the net-merged-into-the-world plots!

wow... do another 1!please!

Oh man... You write so much better than I do... God I feel bad. I suck so much. How did I ever get you as a reviewer?

But cripes was this good. All of it, concept, writing... ENVY... LOTS OF IT... GRAR... Aw, Forte. If he were real, I'd have to hug him, if even just for how he is in this fic.

That's really cool, and I'd love to see one from Enzan's point of view...maybe he'd be bitter? Happy Blues was there? *shrugs* You decide, but I do want to see more of this.

Excellent story! I do think that you should continue with the story. But if you don't want to, then you don't need to. But anyways, great job!

Wow. I'm a bit disappointed to see this is just a one-shot. I'd love to see more of this world you created. It's very dark, true, but it has an incredible amount of potential, and it feels really well thought-out.

This is a great story. The part with Forte reminded me of The Big O... anyway... I don't know more than two people. I can't ask them to ask you to continue this... ;_;