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Darkeiya the Dark Ocelot 2004-11-20 . chapter 1
Heh. That's Homer.

Short and simple. Very neat.
eViL pHaRiE pRiNcEsS20 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
it was alright i guess you could have put more detain in to it but then again its the simpsons its suppose to be stupid lol

luv eViL pHaRiE pRiNcEsS20
Mr. 04 2004-11-16 . chapter 1
Hay you should make another chapter to this story. I like this keep writeing. good work but no more kidy farts lol
xBlondeVenusx 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Great job!
Again, send as much as you want!
I'm working on the stuff you sent me earlier!

~AF881~
Dead Composer 2004-11-05 . chapter 1
Not bad. Kinda funny.
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