Me again :). Another great when-they-were-young look at Kyou and Kagura, although you wrote this one first. It was nice to be able to see both sides of the same meeting and get insight into how they each felt. One thing that I thought you did especially well was Kagura's thoughts as she tried to draw Kyou out. She was trying really hard to succeed and at the same time she was putting a lot of pressure on herself when she thought she did something wrong or not good enough. That's her entire personality in a nutshell and yet few people hit on it. She does try her hardest to do things right, which is where a lot of her problems start since her hardest tends to be a little too hard.

Anyway, I thought this was a really good Kagura piece. The same question I asked about "Lost In My Mind" goes for this one as well. Keep up the good work, especially if you decide to keep writing about Kyou or Kagura!

i thought it was between good n ok.. i alrady told u tat.. but watevr.. xp.. the begining was kinda lossey goosy.. needs too pull teh reader in a lil more.. n then it became a lil confussing then good. ^__^

that was sad ::sob sob:: and a little funny.'what is the life story of a car'...'an autobiography' -_-' where did u get the joke?
::stare strangely:: whatever, well overall it was really an emotional story and with a hint of funnynessness hehe ^_^

Heh. That was pretty good. Really cute! ^_^ (I hope you're not a guy, lol) Jk. I liked it.

That was GREAT!

I love Kagura, and am SO rooting for Kyo to accept her as she accepts him.

Quick, simple, and pure sweetness.

Aw this was a really cute story that made me feel like crying and laughing at the same time, it was beautiful! I love this pairing and do hope you'll do more pieces of work on this firery passionate couple!

Hehe, nice going with this! I like it, Kagura+Kyo are one of my favorite couples from this cool anime series ^_^ continue your wonderful talents and feel free to read and review my two fics I posted!

It's short and to the point, emphasizes Kyo's distant personality. Nice pronoun to use, the Cat, instead of "he" all the time. That joke was pretty cheesy but it did bring a laugh...at it's aburdity. Write some more because you've got talent.

Aw! That was so cute! ^__^

I like the joke. ;__; I thought it was a nice add in.

Anyway, great story!

-BkG