good story

I kinda felt like reading something about Hojo, of all people. ::glomps Vincent:: I really liked this story. Just an interesting perspective, and I'm glad to see just Hojo, not so much emphasis on all the people's lives he messed up. The weirdo. What a great villain. Anyway, this is an awesome story, and I'm glad you shared it with us. Your characterization of the professor is wonderful!

Wow...So long, but very good! I believe you got Hojo's personality, thoughts, and whatnot, so very close to the game. Hojo is a hard character to write and you have done it so beautifully. Great job!

Sweet...Hojo's a cool villain.

this was a really good one shot. kinda long, but it kept my attention really well. this is the point in the game where you really want vincent and cloud to come in and kick hojo's butt. lol.

Absolutely brilliant! Never doubt your grasp on Hojo's character -- you have it down pat!

You've always had such a wonderful way with bringing words to life, so that your readers can practically taste the characters' emotions. But at the same time, in many places in this you repeated yourself. Probably one of the hardest things for a writer to do is cut out parts of what they've written (I experience this a lot myself). But for sake of clarity, sometimes we need to remove even large chunks of the story. It helps keep the focus intact.

(Incidentally, I got your email, and will be replying to it shortly! I've managed to get piled under a bunch of things I need to do, yet again -_- Also, I have an author to recommend to you next time, if you're interested in reading about Hojo.)