Wow...reading a fanfic this epic. You know, this is pretty good! Sure there's only a few grammer mistakes but other than that it pretty much grips you after the first chapter and refuses to let go.
And, heh, you claim to not have a sense of humor but I read 'Creative Results' and 'Can you read this?' and seeing the antics of Ry the imp. You have some sense of humor and that really gives this story a good lifting feeling when things seem down.


By the way, I adore Ry! He's a complete riot and I think I'd act the same way if I saw a dragon like Draken anyway.


"I call shot-gun!"


(Imagines Draken groaning in annoyance)


"No."


"Aww..."

wow - what can i say - that was really amazing - i have to admit: this is the one fanfic that i read from beginning to end in one sitting (oh my back >.

o.o woah, amazing, your story is just so cool, I even like the OC characters, and thats really weird since I normally only like oficial ones.

How the hell do you write so awesome... update soon please, I really wanna know what happens, you can't just leave it hanging there! o_o

Not bad. I didn't see any mistakes, and this chapter was very well-plotted. I think it was pretty eventful as well. Oh yeah, despite what some people think, I like long chapters. I hate it when I wait a long time for a fic, then have to settle with a very short chapter, then wait for another long time.

Speaking of fics, I updated All of Me (GUN Conspiracy renamed) and Ultimate Chaos (twice). I think you'd like 'em, especially Ultimate Chaos!

Anyway, that was a nice, well-plotted, long chapter. Keep up the good work!

Megan: I'm glad to see Sonic's okay, I'm reliefed!
Cappy: Yeah, Megan was about to kill you if Sonic didn't wake up in the next chapter. And I love the way Shadow is!
Star-La: Aehehe
Megan: *holds a banner up that says "Sonic rules" with the words "kill Shadow" scibled out

Megan: I'm glad to see Sonic's okay, I'm reliefed!
Cappy: Yeah, Megan was about to kill you if Sonic didn't wake up in the next chapter. And I love the way Shadow is!
Star-La: Aehehe
Megan: *holds a banner up that says "Sonic rules" with the words "kill Shadow" scibled out

Maan you REALLY gotta stop being so mean to your writing... It bugs me! You do great at it, and you're always saying how much it stinks!! Well it doesn't! So cut it out! Even if it makes you like EXPLODE, just admit that your story is pretty dang good. ADMIT IT DANG YOU! Muhahahaha! Scarlet Forest... SUCH A FREAKIN SEXY NAME! Man it's awesome, and then you got Mister Doggy Man finally back! CUERVO! Super nice job as always, no matter what you say!

Uneventful? You call that uneventful? Well, this has explained A LOT about the whole entire thing starting from chapter 12. In the realm of dreams, where the fears of your life come back and haunt you... It was a great chappy.

I like the metaphors of your fic too, you sound like a poet. I especially like the part where you described how we try to burry our misfortunes and move on, but no matter what we do, we still have chains... Did you make all of them up? If so...

o.O This is so good. Really I mean it just...great. NO joke. I love the details. Draken sounds so cool. I love dragons. But Rita was mean for hurting the trees. ;_; poor killer trees. Save the trees!! Ry is funny, and what you did to Shadow and Rika concerning MAria and Rika's little bro and sis was just cruel. Yet the story is so awesome.

Have to say that I'm not for the change of the title of the story... sounds like a title for a one-shot... but never mind...

The chapter appeared a little disorienting at first, but you revealed everything slowly, and by the end of it, it all makes sense. Good job on that. Description is also good.

And I see that the end is further away than I thought. PLz update soon!

Another awesome chapter!

EP! That was cool! You had me tottally tottally TOTTALLY stuck in your story! AND it was 20 pages! Usually I can't read that long! Wow that was AWESOME! I got a little confused when Shadow and Rika got taken away though... That's about it! This was way too cool! I MUST SAY... You rock more then a boulder! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA! MUHAHAHAHAHA!... Triple manicle laugh just for you! Awesome super job! Update soon or I'll eat you with a cereal spoon! See ya!

*screams* I hope Shadow and Rika won't get hurt! (thoe I don't know much on Shadow). And one last thing, I hope Sonic will be OK the most!

DON'T LET SONIC DIE, OR ELSE!

Nice chappie. Btw, don't look to me for help in your writing errors because I'm probably worse than you and I don't even notice them.

Hope is only an illusion, eh? Nice chapter. So is the Divine good or evil? The way you describe the surroundings makes the story flow very nicely. Hope, confusion, enlightenment, these feelings you described excellently. Anyway, think the refrence you put at the prolougue applies here. Good foresight.