I'm glad you've made the characters as in character as possible. And good job on Slash! He's not out of character at all!

luved it!

There aren't many good Snowboard Kids fics out there, but this knocked my socks off! Great job! )

Hey, if you're feeling depressed, it helps to watch Neon Genesis Evangelion. It's very inspirational.

Great chapter. Keep it up!

wow, this is an excellent fic. Everything is spell checked and it makes it so much easier to read. I like how you throw in some japanese refereces too. the storyline is excellent, keep up the awesome work! cant wait for more

hey, thanks 4 checking out my fanfic. A new chapter is coming out soon! I'd like 2 comment on ur fanfic 1st. (Drum roll)...I LUV IT! It has a good plot and storyline. Keep up the gr8 work!

Excellent background information on the original character and her personality, friends, family, etc. Also, great job with keeping everyone in character, and not to mention writing this awesome fic. :D

Exellent! As I was reading this chapter I wanted to know the personalities of the eigth grade kids. Are they siblings of the Snowboard Kids? And since you said the school went from kindergarden to eigth grade. I was wondering if you could tell a little bit about the younger kids.

Sango controlling Miroku? Sounds like a good fanfic to me! lol

heh, don't be discouraged about me being the only reviewer as this section doesn't get checked on every day, it can take quite a few days to get the people that normally read this section...

Tommy and Wendy are pretty hard to write for as their characters are pretty much set in stone and the changes you can make to them realistically are small.

Tommy is quite shy but not really shy and is still cheerful around others while Wendy is somebody who really knows too much for her own good...

The rest are easy and changes (but too drastic) can be made such as Slash noticing the expression change...

Not that it's bad but I wouldn't write that because I view Slash as an immature, fun loving kid who is pretty dense are far as reading expressions where concerned... however you want Slash to fall for your OC :) and as a result perhaps making him mature slightly.

If you read my fic you'd notice that even though I view it as two years on I have Slash acting immaturely as ever and as a result Jam has shifted away slightly due to having grown up a bit. I get this idea because at the middle and end of Snowboard kids 2, Jam was beginning to mature... but anyways... nice work...you know... and update whenever you want :D.

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Slash isn't that out of character, he's lazy, he'll use others to help get by in life and you don't have to include all the kids all the time.

By the way, what made you think you'd get in trouble for this?

Oh yeah and can you get virtual brownies in next time? Digital ones are okay, but the virtual ones just seem... better for some reason :D, but thanks anyway. *munches on digitial brownie.

So far so good...

One hint though, give a new line to a different speaker in your conversations, it makes reading them easier...

Aside that the story is pretty solid...

Keep it up! :D

Ha ha, i'm reviewing myself! so...anyone else gonna review? I'd like some fans...please...