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Reviews For: Everything In Time

irishgirl9
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseAnother great Alec and Asha story! I loved it! Great job!
CT
2005-05-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseThis is a real gem and I can't believe it doesn't have more reviews than this. I guess there aren't enough fans of the Alec/Asha pairing. I love what you've done here. I've read a few of your other fics and I've noticed something...you take the characters out of the realm of the show. Personality wise you keep them within the confines of the show, but story wise you go somewhere else. Nothing is over the top like it would be on the show, you put the characters in realistic/real life situations. In your stories they experience the emotional up and downs of real people, and not everything is resolved quickly or with a happy ending. As a reader I find that refreshing. It really allows me to see the characters like real people and I'm able to feel for them. Excellent job.
James
2005-02-15
ch 2, anon.
abuseA few typos, but this is good. You've captured real life here. Kids and work get in the way of plans all the time. Good job and I look forward to reading more from you.
Ana
2004-12-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis is such a sweet story. I wasn't a fan of Asha on the show, but I really like the way you write her.
Tina
2004-11-30
ch 2, anon.
abuseaw, this is so sweet. sexy, yet romantic. i really like your alec and asha. when i was reading the story i could really feel how in love they were and how frustrated asha was about not being able to be with him. and the way you described how alec put her to bed and what he was thinking as he was holding her is so beautiful. i really like this pairing and i hope you plan on writing more with these two.
Angie
2004-11-16
ch 2, anon.
abuseThis is great. You always manage to capture the smallest but sweetest moments between those two. I love how Asha and Alec are still so in love after so many years. You really have a talent for bringing the best out in these characters...which is amazing considering the show never gave you much to work with when it was on the air. I can't wait to read your next fic.
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