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Athyra 2008-07-24 ch 1,	abuseThis story is amazing! I've never think of this in this perspective at all...it truly blew my mind away...
Dead Uchiha 2008-07-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was just fantastic! I'm irrationally in love with you right now! It was so! Refreshingly! Morbid! The Sesshoumaru/Rin dynamic was so twisted but at the same time it was absolutely perfect! GAH! I love it!
Forlorn Maiden 2008-06-19 ch 1,	abusePowerful. Very moving.
katana sohma-demon girl 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseI...am so glad...to have found this... This was amazing, tragically beautiful, and horrifying in every aspect of this story. Why I have not found this till now remains a mystery. I just loved it and it made my eyes bulge on the depth you used to create this masterpiece. And it gives us a whole new way to look at their relationship, since most people -including me- want Rin happy. Angsty fics are awesome though. I'm extremely jealous of your talent; the only horror story I wrote with Rin is about her past before Sesshomaru... Yours is an ORIGINAL. This shows I need to work on writing a lot more. I'm adding this to my faves and providing a little note about it -maybe even a link- so EVERYONE can look it up. I'm doing it, because this is just too good not to read. Hope ya don't mind...
aynomayac 2007-11-02 ch 1,	abusewow!
undistinguishablefire 2007-09-06 ch 1,	abuseWell that was successfully depressing. Especially the part where Sesshoumaru accidentally tore her back apart, ouch. I never could have imagined the of Sesshoumaru bringing Rin back to life as a selfish act, thanks alot. It was well written, I will say that much.
Amadoni 2007-08-16 ch 1,	abuseAnd I thought living forever was a good thing. Geez, after this, I'm kinda glad to be like the rest of the human population, mortal.
Eve 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseDamn. Really really powerful. Loved it.
bobalina 2007-07-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseDamn, I've never heard it like that. If I'm not, you know, being too vague. Keep writing! Toodles, bobalina
Clorinda 2007-04-01 ch 1,	abuse"She thinks it was silly of Sesshoumaru to ever condone the weapon, to call it incapable of killing. It had so excelled at destroying a life." Deep, poignant, eye-opening. Adjectives are just not enough to describe what you've done with this fic, and its many, many layers. One never exactly wants to consider Sesshomaru's selfish callousness, too taken away by his fits and starts of kindness. (Reading this one story has made me cynical enough to put "kindness" in quotes.) And it's especially difficult to consider Rin, since she's eternally a small seven-year-old child and one takes it for granted that her future with her beloved Sesshomaru will be a happy one. I have to admit this fic wasn't as realistic as a tad bit cynical, but whatever. It was distinctly eye-opening to a perfectly reasonable alternative scenario, an impact compounded by the hard-hitting observations you make. Loved it.
midnightsweet 2007-03-27 ch 1,	abusedifferent but nice
CalliopeMused 2007-02-12 ch 1,	abuseThis is haunting, beautiful, and terrible (in the best way- I do mean that as a compliment). The imagery is very well done, the characters are true, and I love the concept.
Venttianne 2007-01-23 ch 1,	abuseinteresting...
BladesoftheValkyrie 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseI usually don't enjoy the more depressing stories, but this is such a great idea! It makes me sad for Rin, but at the same time I kept thinking that, even if Sesshoumaru only wants to keep Rin as a living doll, he is still "weak" enough (according to most of his arguments, anyway) to want to keep her. Huh. Anyway, great work! I'm really becoming a fan, here... ^_^
Long Lost Dream37 2006-12-01 ch 1,	abuseno matter how much i read this thing over and over again, i still think is just GREAT!

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