Itll have to be nemisis or nemispawn or...m..may...maybe?its Lloyd

I like this story...
it sounds like there's another sequel though...
is there another sequel?

Why is it no one has asked how Loyd's alive?

It would have been cruel of me to have read the entirety of this story in one go and not leave a review at the end of it.

I have to say all in all I enjoyed it, especially how Artemis came to be where he was and so forth.

You have certainly deviated from the usual pairing list in the fact that you are the only author to use Noishe as a humanoid character instead of leaving him as a dog. It certainly was weird to see him paired with Colette by the end but not altogether unpleasant.

The only thing I take note on and it is exceptionally minor is that I noticed that you had Zelos looking at Sheena in a harsh way, Im sure it was something like a look of envy for Lloyd or what not but nothing became of it afterwards which was a pity as there was a little bit of Colloyd bashing (not that I mind, I personally dislike that pairing) but no real Sheelos bashing considering thats what that scene may have been hinting at. However as I said it is fairly minor.

All in all a good story to read and allowed me to keep my faith in the game's fiction base.

Thanks

Regards

Riptos

Man, poor Nemesis. I feel sorry for the creature for having to deal with being Raine's Guinea Pig for her experiments. She sort of reminds me of someone I watched in Tenchi Muyo. Washu, I think. In any case, I'm surprised that both Noishe and Colette were married right after that. That certainly got by surprise. I'm even surprised to the fact that Zelos is the half brother to this Rapheal guy and teamed up with him and his sister to form an organization in order to bring order to the Tethe 'Alla region. Just as the red head was about to make another expansion to the cause, he was stopped immediately for when he heard the King, through his super hearing, wanting to declare war. As if the world itself didn't have enough problems to deal with. I feel sorry for Presea for when she has to deal with the fact that she's now living alone within her newly built village. It's kinda sad for when she has to live all alone. I just hope that it wouldn't lead to something horrible. In any case, it seems to me that Genis is working on a type of technology that would be sort of similar to our own along with Yuan. Not only that, but as a final note, it's a good plot that you've put up for when you had both Lloyd and Sheena's twin kids to be training in swords and ninja training. I'm surprised that Kuchinawa came back to serve as the chief of Old Mizuho while Sheena serves as the leader of New Mizuho. Talk about turning a new leaf and starting over again. In any case, I'm glad that everything turns out fine in the end for everyone. But what about Artemis? Whatever happened to him? Did he accomplish his mission or just set things in motion for something worse? Well, I guess we'll find out in the next chapter. Later and keep up the good work!

Maurice A. Nigma

One more to go. Looking forward to it.

Ah! TWINS?! :D wat about Artemis? was he youngest? O o ... woah.. twin older siblings ...

Well, this is a rather short and interesting chapter that you've put up. I mean, first of all, who would've thought that all this time that everyone was worrying over Dirk, Yuan, and Kratos, that they'd end up in the beach? I didn't really see that coming what I didn't see is the fact that Kratos himself fainted for when Lloyd mentioned that he's going to be a grandfather. It was pretty funny that it was like that. Not to mention the fact that Nemesis(or Nem for short) now has the personality that seems similar to an anime character that I've just saw recently. I don't know who, but I think that it's related to a character in...I forgot. In any case, Raine must be having a fun time with Nemesis as her research subject. Boy, that crazy woman is rather excited for when she gets a new research subject. Man, that It must be hell for Lloyd and Sheena to come with names for their baby(babies in their case). I mean, those are pretty long and interesting names that they've went through. I feel sorry for those two. Who I'm most sorry for will be Lloyd for when Sheena gets here. Whew boy, that's a sight that I've been meaning to see! Well, I'll be counting on the next part of the Epilogue. Later and keep up the good work! Just try to have fun with your next fiction in works. Don't think about anything that might get in the way.

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

*gaspeth*! TWINS! XD

Aw
that was good! :D
will there be a sequal? How did Artemis get back home?
wah? Tell me please? :D

Almost ending time. Both a sad but happy thing. But such an enjoyable chapter to head into it. Good times.

Interesting time to add a new character into the mix. I'm interested to see what part belle plays in the epilogue of the story.

Both of them. Haha.

Well, it's a good thing that you've managed to nearly finish the story that you've put up for so long. I wonder how long will it take for you to put up two parts of the Epilogue that you've worked on? In any case, here's the review.

Now, it's a good way for you to end the story with Artemis wiping everyone's memory of him while at the same going back to his own time, but there are things that are left unsaid. I mean, just what in the world happened to Kratos while both he and Lloyd were replaced by biomechanical clones of themselves? Just how would the Nemesis would fit into the new world? And just how would this Belle girl would react for when she realizes that she's now a part of the group? What would happen with both Lloyd and Sheena for when they both got married? And is Mithos really gone for good now that he's bound to Derris-Kharlan for all time? I guess that we'll have some of the answers to most of these questions for when we read the final chapters.

What I like about this chapter is the fact that you've managed to pair up Colette and Noishe as a couple is something that I didn't really foresee. Not to mention the fact that the Summon Spirits seemed to me like they haven't been satisfied with the way they were treated. But I bet with time that everything would be alright. But now that both Colette and Noishe are a couple, I guess that it makes Celesis' servant Fefnir its loyal companion. Talk about poetic irony. In any case, I hoped to see the rest of the chapters that you're planning to put up soon. This story, along with others, is giving me the motivation that I need to write so that I could have the ideas needed for my own long ToS Crossover project. It would take time to get it all in order and make the necessary preperations, but I have faith that it would all be worth it in the end. Later and Keep up the good work!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

Don't worry about the long wait of the chapter, Hikari. This chapter is well worth it, even if it is short. Man, that must've took all of Artemis' strength in order to seal Mithos' corrupted spirit entirely. But it seems to run within his family. Not to mention the fact that he seems to have also inherited a few traits from his parents that seemed to have been linked to his life in Mizuho. But it also seems that his coming to the past is becoming useful than he realized for when he remembered the magic lessons that Raine gave to them.

I wonder just exactly how both Lloyd and Sheena are going to calm the raging Summon Spirits for when one of the, Volt specifically, is now loose all filled with anger and rage towards the one that betrayed him in the past before? Especially for when Sheena is now risking both of her unborn children on the line? If anything happens to her...well, then Artemis have better be prepared for the consequences of his actions. I just hope that his sealing of Mithos's spirit in Derris-Kharlan would be enough to rid of him for good. Or is it something predestined even before the start of this story? Something that even the boy himself is one of many players who made sure that this destiny has been forfilled? Well, I guess that we'll have to wait and see for the next chapter to find out huh? I hope that you keep up the good work and that the next chapter would mark the end of this story. Later!

Maurice A. Nigma
The Great Blue One

o.o I put the word "confused" in my last review...AH NOW I PUT IT IN THIS ONE! DX WAH! PLEASE DON'T DISCONTINUE! PLEASE DO NOT!!

I have gotten on to everything. Though I am confused about Rapheal. AND WHERE THE HELL IS KRATOS?!?!??!

I'll have to keep reading to find out!! WOO!