i liked it it would hav been cool to see him beat that bastard arlong

i like the way you wrote this story. it's pretty impressive. though im a sucker for happy endings,,the ending here is appropriate.

This is a great story but you shound of had zoro stay that wound of been a lot beter

i cried. this was very touching.

-Hmm. Nicely done. Eloquent, and precise. For the record, though, cautious and careful are nearly the same thing. It would be considered somewhat repetitive if you mention both in the same sentence. And, one more thing before I begin my long ranting. The scene where Zoro fights Arlong. I realize that Zoro is skilled, but not THAT skilled to finish him off in that short amount of time. Otherwise than those two objects of concern, this story is excellent.

-I do realize that you have a site called "Pirate Love", and yes, I have discovered it. If it pleases you, I have added it to my favorite/bookmarks. It is a very nicely formatted, excellently presented, thoroughly entertaining site. Excellence, and the couplings were brilliant.

-I wish to submit a fanfiction to your site, but you see, it will not allow me to. Therefore, I ask for a way that you can somehow accept my work? If you must know, and if there is no way of sending it to you, I wish to tell you that it is posted on this site. It is called "Answer", and my penname is Yachtzee, if you haven't noticed already. If you can preview it and see if it is suitable/alright for your webpage, inform me. Thank you!

-None of these comments I have just made are intended to insult in any way. Please do not take it offensively.

-Yachtzee-

Bravo! Bravo!! Luv it!! Maybe you can rite it into a full sotry?? If u can plz update soon!

Wonderful! Finally, a well-done AU fic! Kudos!

This is really great!

This is soo nice bad soo sad why must they part?? I wan to cry...haha i love ur story soo much...keep up the good work and uplaod the next story soon...>_

yeah, Zoro was damn wonderd big time!
it might have been an interrested fight between him and Arlong

I love your story. Different, mature and really touching. I have enjoyed it a lot. :)

You Know honen U should really continue this I really think this is good. but here's an idea: since Nami is so alone, stop prolonging her agony and end her lonelyness. Give Zoro's baby. After all that one night stand is all it takes for to creat a baby. Give him or her Zoro's eyes(steel- gray eye color) Nami's smile, and their ambiton. Think about it honen.

sincerely
Tea

your story was very touching. I really enjoyed it!
*wipes tears away*. Yeah, yeah, I'm a softie, I know, but I really really liked this story. Good job. Keep on writing, I like your style.

Anna-chan

I liked your fic! yeah!

I love it. It is so sad at the end, but it is a great slice to the real anime. And i totally agree with you, Zoro could've beat Arlong, if it wasn't for Mihawk. Glad to have someone who agrees. Good job...