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anon 2006-09-19 . chapter 1
cool crossover idea. I like the story idea and hope you write more. The only nitpicky thing I can mention is that given the physical locations of the Islands of Japan and the Island of Manhattan on the Earth ... then a moon high above New York City (if I remember 'So you want to be a wizard' correctly) would be unseen in Japan, hidden behind the Earth. Fred's light would probably be seen more as a lightening of the Eastern horizon (or western or both, depending on which way is closest to Fred's position in the sky) then as a new star halfway to the moon. Again cause it is all hidden by the Earth. I do understand and appreciate the need to describe an event that can be tied to the book for those who read it but I just can't see the moon or Fred being all that visible from Japan. (not that you need to change this, I don't think very many people will catch this). I imagine, from Japan, it would be a bright sunny day, then poof the Sun is gone. Then it comes back. Since it takes about 8 minutes after they succeed for the sunlight to reach earth, Ranma had to endure about 10 minutes or so (maybe more like 15??) in the dark, frustrated that he can't help and curious about what is going on. Well, that's how I see it.
migele 2005-12-12 . chapter 2
nice one.
stumbled upon it by accident.
I'll keep watching you!
ranger5 2005-12-07 . chapter 2
Its been a while. I was extremely glad to see this post. Keep it up.
Dragon Man 180 2005-12-07 . chapter 2
Very interesting, I'm eager to see how Ranma and Nabiki fare as martial artist wizards!
Bobboky 2005-12-06 . chapter 2
vwey good
Jerry Unipeg 2005-12-06 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! I think Nabiki would make a GREAT wizard.
Innortal 2005-12-06 . chapter 2
Not a bad intro, and looking forward to more.
Jerry Unipeg 2004-11-07 . chapter 1
Nice start.
Silverscale 2004-11-07 . chapter 1
Please update this wonderful story soon.
dogbertcarroll 2004-11-07 . chapter 1
His book should have a section detailing the events of the sun going out. All active wizards and their actions are listed.
DerektheRogue 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Very good Mnemorath , but could you PLEASE write faster?
I'm sorry to be whiny but a chappy a couple or more months of THIS QUALITY is just plain MEAN!!

Derek The Rogue
Innortal 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Good job. You set up Ranma's side of the story well, as well as introduced Nabiki early on. I look forward to your next chapter, and hope it doesn't take several months like some authors.
aqualens 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
Having read the wizarding novels, I think this ties in very well. I've never read a Ranma fic that crosses over with that series and would be interested in reading more. A thumbs up and hope you persist with this fic.
ranma hibiki 2004-11-06 . chapter 1
a wizard ranma with nabiki. sw33t! hope to see more updates soon
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