Wow never thought that Kagome would do something like that but after think int i can see why she would... i agree whit her almost a hundren percent. they do treat her like a slave of a sort...gotta go before i dig me own grave...

oh my gosh, Kagome's SORROW filled life? Puleeze, she can't even spell the word! She's like so happy-go-lucky all the time. FYI, if you're gonna have Inu betray her, might as well have it convincing. Plus, Sess does not have an army, he has an imp and a brat, okay?

Woe...

Just a guess here, you're not an Inu/Kag person are ya? Well if that was off on a limb, this will cause me to fall off the tree: you're a Kag/Sess person, right?

We shall just ignore my personal feelings and get to my critique: Overall, very well written and insightful. Love the tone and angst. :)

This was certainly...interesting. I've read many stories where Kagome turns on her friends, though this is the first one where Sango turned on Kagome too. Usually, Sango is the one whos defending Kagome. It wasn't that bad though. Everything was kind of expected to happen, but ,overall, it was pretty good.