|Reviews for The Duel|
| Sailor GaOn Donut 8/27/10 . chapter 1
| Lora Kael 5/15/09 . chapter 1
He he, it's an interesting strategy for getting a date. Or a relationship. ;)
I'm not anyone else should use it though.
| Myriaddd 1/7/07 . chapter 1
That story was so funny! Most humor genre fanfics are so out of preportion that they dont even make me laugh. This one had me giggling for ages! I love the thought battles inside their heads! We all do that, dont we? :)
| lynne the HUGE sw fan 4/1/06 . chapter 1
woah! you really did well- you captured the characters' personalities almost perfectly. i would change the ending... i don't think it really fit in.. I can't see Mara TACKLING anybody quite that way... and the phrase "alabaster skin" is...well, you still rock! keep a-writin'!
| The Noble French Fry 10/10/05 . chapter 1
lol. Loved it! Both of their mental arguments are hilarious. ;)
| Maria Keeth 7/12/05 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this story! It was awesome and funny! Great writing.
| Shi Feng Huang 3/4/05 . chapter 1
great work, really funny and staying in character too, a wonder of wonders
| Celtic Knot 1/27/05 . chapter 1
Oh, this is awesome! You captured Luke and Mara perfectly, and the arguments they had with themselves were hilarious. Great job!
| InsaneJediGirl 12/7/04 . chapter 1
Nice story.I could see this happening with them before they got married!
| JediKnightMuse 11/8/04 . chapter 1
This was cute! You wrote it really well. Nice job. I think you did really good with the thoughts they probably would have been thinking. Keep writing.
| Vaapad 11/8/04 . chapter 1
Great story. Please Please Please Please Please Please update!
| Passer by 11/8/04 . chapter 1
Strangely enough, I enjoyed that. I am not one for love fics, but this one was realistic and good fun. Sehr gut, keep up the really good work!
| Ash Darklighter 11/7/04 . chapter 1
Hey! I enjoyed this. Great fun. Pity there's no more.
| SailorLeia 11/7/04 . chapter 1
I just had to write in and tell you, great story! I loved all of the inner voices and fighting between them! GREAT JOB!
| Pokey1984 11/6/04 . chapter 1
I deserve no credit whatsoever, even as a Beta. Mar'isu is just a wonderful writer. Really, truly, and honestly. There really wasn't much I could say to improve this so I made stuff up to make it seem like I was doing something :-)
Some things I didn't get to comment on, cause they werent' in the version I read:
*the Tatooine farmboy kissed the Emperor’s Hand* Great line! it fit's perfectly too.
*Non-aggression with her was like the peace before the thermal detonator blew.* Another great line, very StarWars and yet, it's original. Too often authors take a common real life phrase and substitute a few words to make it a Star Wars phrase, you seem to have a knack for making up your own phrases.
*Let’s see what else she’ll let us do!* and I know I commented on this one before, but it's still great. I think it's my new favorite quote!
*But at least, I’ll be holding her.
Oh. Hey! Good idea.*
Last, but not least, the line that left me giggling ten minutes later, just because I've been the second line far too often.
Okay, there are a million more things I could rave about, and a few I could criticise, I do have personal preferences, after all. but I think I'll cut this short. Great job, Mar'isu!