nice

He he, it's an interesting strategy for getting a date. Or a relationship. ;)

I'm not anyone else should use it though.

Love Lora

That story was so funny! Most humor genre fanfics are so out of preportion that they dont even make me laugh. This one had me giggling for ages! I love the thought battles inside their heads! We all do that, dont we? :)

woah! you really did well- you captured the characters' personalities almost perfectly. i would change the ending... i don't think it really fit in.. I can't see Mara TACKLING anybody quite that way... and the phrase "alabaster skin" is...well, you still rock! keep a-writin'!

lol. Loved it! Both of their mental arguments are hilarious. ;)

I really enjoyed this story! It was awesome and funny! Great writing.

great work, really funny and staying in character too, a wonder of wonders

Oh, this is awesome! You captured Luke and Mara perfectly, and the arguments they had with themselves were hilarious. Great job!

Nice story.I could see this happening with them before they got married!

This was cute! You wrote it really well. Nice job. I think you did really good with the thoughts they probably would have been thinking. Keep writing.

Great story. Please Please Please Please Please Please update!

Strangely enough, I enjoyed that. I am not one for love fics, but this one was realistic and good fun. Sehr gut, keep up the really good work!

Hey! I enjoyed this. Great fun. Pity there's no more.

Dear mar-isu,

I just had to write in and tell you, great story! I loved all of the inner voices and fighting between them! GREAT JOB!

SailorLeia

I deserve no credit whatsoever, even as a Beta. Mar'isu is just a wonderful writer. Really, truly, and honestly. There really wasn't much I could say to improve this so I made stuff up to make it seem like I was doing something :-)

Some things I didn't get to comment on, cause they werent' in the version I read:

*the Tatooine farmboy kissed the Emperor’s Hand* Great line! it fit's perfectly too.

*Non-aggression with her was like the peace before the thermal detonator blew.* Another great line, very StarWars and yet, it's original. Too often authors take a common real life phrase and substitute a few words to make it a Star Wars phrase, you seem to have a knack for making up your own phrases.

*Let’s see what else she’ll let us do!* and I know I commented on this one before, but it's still great. I think it's my new favorite quote!

*But at least, I’ll be holding her.

Oh. Hey! Good idea.*

Last, but not least, the line that left me giggling ten minutes later, just because I've been the second line far too often.

Okay, there are a million more things I could rave about, and a few I could criticise, I do have personal preferences, after all. but I think I'll cut this short. Great job, Mar'isu!

-Pokey1984