OMg this is sad!! i really hope you update asap! this is a great story! or a start! wee! hope you have fun! no to mean! i mean it in a positive way!

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Wow, is that all? I really wish for you to write more to ths.

This is an excellent opening. Very powerful imagery. ^^

Even if it was only still the prologue, this fic is already beautiful. Continue, continue, continue please? :D

go to the future quick! i mean... not like that, but write the next part of the story. i would really love to read it ^_^. -soft smile-

I don't like SasuSaku, but while I was reading this. . . well, there were barely recognizable thoughts in mah mind that maybe - just maybe - if a SasuSaku story was written as well as this was, then perhaps I could enjoy it. ^_^ Wonderful job, and I can't wait to see it updated!

wow... i like it, its very angst. i want to see what happen next

Awesome prologue. (^^) I absolutely love your writing style; the way you incorporate details, and how you begin to... how do I put this?... Aah. :shakes head: I don't know how to say describe it, but I do know that I hold your stories in high regard. And I like this 'modern-High school-type' fic, because it's not _truly_ AU-- it retains a connection to the actual timeline, doesn't it? I anticipate for more, because I'm dying (lol, not really) to see how big a role the 'past' will play. Will modern-day Sakura and Sasuke (and the other characters) experience any sort of 'flashbacks,' like, for example, in the form of dreams? Will those flashbacks impact the plot alot, or just slightly enough to invoke a series of actions? And I can't wait to see how you will make Sakura the antithesis of Sasuke. Will Sakura retain her 'canon' characteristics (why can't I just say, "will she be IC?")? Blah blah blah... Ah, too many questions. (^^;)

Do I have you on my Author Alert list? ...Eh, I do now.

wow great prologue

I love the way you write the story(you're very fluid,and smooth.Plus,I love the way you descriebd the grave,and the fireflies,and Sakura's emotions),and the plot sounds promising although I hate highschool-type-of- AU-fanfictions. Also,multiple pairings just doesn't appeal to me.I'd prefer a story that focused on one pairing or maybe a triangle only because if it were multiples,it would be way too confusing.

Very dramatic beginning. Sasuke's behaviour was a bit weird, but Sakura's was very fitting.

hm...i'd have to say so-so for this. It was really good and I think I would prefer this as a one-shot if the end was more polished. But because it's not, it was a good beginning. Yet I'm not quite sure I'm gonna like the plot. =P Not you but stories that take place in the present seem to be too different from the actual Canon type of personalities. So when you do this try to make sure you still add detail and maintain the same personalities and keep only a few recurring memories of the past that seem familiar. Also, I didn't really like the phrases in parentheses, mainly because they didn't need to be there. It's ok to be a BIT cryptic sometimes instead of pointing everything out.*that's a bit exaggerated*
For example, you didn't need to add in the '(Haku's) needles', it could've just been needles=P
just tiny suggestions, is all.
keep it up!
~dobyuk princess