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xxAuraxx
2008-08-29 . chapter 2
Kuronue's necklace is backed in silver ^.^
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 6
So this is the last chapter you have on , and it makes me so sad. I looked on , but I can't find you! So I friended you on livejournal. :) haha I'm akalilLyn. You're an amazing author, and this story draws me in and compels me to keep on reading. It's amazing. I loved each and every bit of it. The descriptions, the dialogue, and characterizations. Wow. Amazing. So I hope I get to read more of it soon! Three years since your last update isn't so bad, really. lol I figure that's the same with my fics since I've lost interest in Inuyasha and am obsessed with shounen ai/yaoi now. Darn those pretty boys. So take your time. I'll just be grateful when a new chapter comes out! Hope to see more from you!

-Lyn
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 5
This "game" is the best ever. hahaha I never get bored of it. Though I imagine the game will end when Kuronue dies and Kurama has to deal with the aftermath. That makes me unimaginably sad. Strange, isn't it? I appreciate your obsessiveness about researching for this fic too. That's amazing work you do. And Jo's youko/kitsune theory makes sense to me too. The Best Defense is an amazing fic, isn't it? hahaha I love your Youko best and her Kurama best. Though it may be a draw. hahaha
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 4
Again, I feel I have to mention my love of your song quotes. They're very fitting to the mood of this story. haha This was an adorable chapter with Kuronue being all helpless and Youko being a mysterious jerk. It was all so cute. haha and the end? Perfect! I love how you describe the scenes as well. It's all so vivid that it doesn't feel as if I'm reading at all. It's like I'm watching a movie. Les gasp. Fantastic.
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 3
MM! FLUFF! I loved it. I love love loved it. It wasn't all in-your-face shounen ai or anything like that. Super nice. I was also just staring at the tragedy/drama genre you put it under, and I suddenly got really sad. I've fallen in love with your Kuronue, and knowing that in canon, he dies...yea. I'm heartbroken already. I love how you interchange between past-past and past-present, by the way. haha Past-present as in...this one. hahaha but yea. It's amazing.
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 2
Thanks so much for the notes at the end. I'm not really confused by anything until I read the notes and then I'm like, OH that makes more sense. lol or something. :D Yes, I'm weird. But this story is amazing. I love their past. It's so unexpected, and I love how vain you make Youko. It's exactly how I picture him, and it's my ideal Youko. Yay. I didn't think he was being overly cruel. It was realistic in my mind. haha anyway, more to read, yay! Sorry if I'm basically reviewing generically, but I just finished reading what you have here and I'm going back to review. haha
LynLin
2008-07-21 . chapter 1
I am amazed at your skill. This story is amazing, and I can't believe it took me 3 years to find it. LOL I love your use of quotes, by the way. It really applies to this story, doesn't it? Anyway, I am captivated by this story, and it's the first with Kuronue in it that I've ever liked. Great job!
morsmordre
2007-12-17 . chapter 6
This? Was awesomely written. While I do realize you're unhappy with it, it is extremely good even as it is. Weaving the whole setting and the background believably was impressive, and I do love your characterizations.

Your profile seems to indicate that you're active, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed for the rest of this story.
BlueUtopiah
2007-01-08 . chapter 6
What's really sad is that I just left you this glowing reveiw and ate it. Let's try this again.

You know, this kind of story is exactly what makes sifting through all the badfic on this site worthwhile. I can't believe I haven't come across this before!

I know from your author's notes that you haven't been happy with some of the chapters, but I must say that they're exquisite. You're writing has a great amount of depth, creatvity and intelligence. I love the pacing of the tale as well. I eagerly await your next chapter, and take your time because this kind of fiction doesn't get written overnight.

I hope you don't mind but I'd like to add this to my YYH Recommended Fanfic List on LiveJournal. There are so few great Youko/Kuronue stories out there and I'd like to direct people to this.
Mayuna
2005-08-31 . chapter 6
I've been meaning to get around to this story since I first saw it on here months ago but didn't have the time. Well I made the time and I must say I am simply blown away. This is the best piece of literature I've read on here. Please put up another chapter. I'm begging you...please...

2005-08-15 . chapter 2
Hiya! I love your story! Hee. I am (sadly) only able to watch YYH eps dubbed on CN (AND THEY'RE NOT THERE ANYMORE!! >.
BlackRoseVixen05
2005-07-11 . chapter 6
Wow, cool fanfic. ^^ I love it, and I hope you update again soon. :D
Holy Wolf
2005-06-03 . chapter 6
Il est tres tres tres bien! C'est magnifique! D'habitude, je n'aime pas KuronuexYoko petit histoires, mais, j'aime. Hi, sorry, I just had the beginning of my french final and i'm kinda stuck...heh heh. What i wrote is: It is very very very good. It's magnificent/wonderful/awesome. (take your pick.) Usually i don't like KuronuexYoko stories, but i like. (Actually, I'm not usually a yaoi fan anyways, but this is really good.) Do update soon, i'm dying to see where life for these two is going. Au revoir. Until the next chapter at least.
Holy Wolf
2005-06-02 . chapter 3
That was certainly original. A waking dream of Kurama doing unspeakable acts to Kuronue. I'm not sure if I should feel sorry for poor Kuronue or if he needs to get a back bone and smack Kurama upside the head...hm...decisions decisions...
Aria Luna
2005-05-02 . chapter 5
Simply adding this review to state I have contacted about their rules. I regret I did it now... Oh, I gonna be in twouble... ^_^''
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