nice story :D

please update soon..

I don't like Kurapika being portrayed as a girl, but I loved loved this story. Please do continue!

Kura x Shal -sighs-

I'm so sorry I didn't review last time when you updated the first 3 chapters. I'm really glad you're working on something I enjoyed so much.
Now to this chapter, I kind of felt like 'what?' when Kurapika slapped Kuroro, because I didn't understand the reason, and then the last part when she was thinking of what happened earlier... well, here's the part I didn't get it:
"...The resentment she had was replaced by admiration, and she could not help but feel at ease just being this close to him.

But the answer Kuroro gave her broke through her reverie..."
Is it that you didn't put Kuroro's answer on purpose as it was supposed to appear just in the end of the chapter when the 'I love you' showed up?... well...

I found a typo though, here it is: "yet the expression in Kuroro’s eyes curiously held an even deeper meaning that Kurapika found it impossible to avert her gaze" I think it was "it was impossible to avert HIS gaze".

Aside of that, I think the chapter was very good. Shalnark is a plus in every fic he's considered as part of the rational cast.
Ahem, are you thinking of making some fun with Ubogin? the part with the bush with silver leaves made think of it.

Good work, just continue please?

please update soon~

I still loved this though

Nice chap

very cute indeed. XD

omg. really took u long enough

Interesting! The relationship seems to be going SOMEWHERE. Everyone seems to to know about them except themselves, LOL. Looking forward to the next chapter! Update soon!

It may took you long to update chapter 3, but it was worth it, because I love the idea of Kurapika getting embarrased by the paint incident, it also adds drama...(honestly felt sorry for her because she shouldn't be laughed at)

Hope Chapter 4 will show progress between Kuroro and Kurapika... I also love the originality that you made everyone into normal teenagers... ^_^ It's great that most of them still stay in character...

cute~!

OH..MY GOD..

i thought that i was just hallucinating when i saw the update 09-08-09.

You see it'd became a habbit of mine to once in a while take a peek at this story to, well, check if you have updated. And lucky me!you did!

I cant believe it!
And im so happy about it! THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH...
This means a lot for me.

i know that it was only revisions..and not to mention you're still at the 3rd chapter.. but still this gives me the overwhelming happiness ive always had from the very first time ive read your story up until now.

The story really did brighten up this time.
You've let the kuruta felt the possibility of kuroro liking her. That adds the spice!

You've also highlighted the rape cases..(and u even manage to gv an exampLe)

and also the part where you have expanded miss hiruki, injected the rumor that theres got to be something between the two, altered the scene where in kuroro just saw kurapika and say 'hi' so cheerilly(coz this, for me, was not something kuroro might actuaLLy do)and the whole paint incident to be exact..very brilliant idea u got there!

And i also got to mention the fact that this time, kurapika wasnt 'that' really of contented to the way it has been between her and her parents. I can now sense the longing of kurapika for her mom and dad that was once not present on the older version.

ALL in aLL you did a very very great job.!

i Love it even more..!

Hoping for the nxt revised chapter..!

Sincerely,
Your oh so very patient fan..efay!

its been 2yrs and yet the impact of your story was stiLL very much the same when i first read it...

i dont care how Long its been..aLL that i want now is the tenth chapter..the eLeventh.. twelft..and eventuaLLy the end of your story...

Not oNLy me...
But there are pLenty of peopLe out there waiting for your update..
Ive read their reviews and everyone states the same thing..
That this story is something..
A story REALLY WORTH READING..

i cant do anything now but wish, hope and pray for you to update..,

so pLease..
Dont Let us down..
Dont just Left us hanging here..
Please update ur story.. Thanks..

And by the way..
DONT YOU DARE think that its just a waste of time to update because no one wiLL read it anymore...
DUH! ive waited for two years!..and not oNLy me..im so positiveLy sure theres a Lot whom are waiting patientLy just Like me...
Are we not writing for?
(im sorry if im too emotionaL..its just that...im beginning to think that u dont have any pLans on pursuing this story..
WELL..I BADLY HOPE.. IM WRONG!!)

so PLEASE DO UPDATE!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!
PLEASE!


SincereLy yours,
efay.

This was an awesome fic! yay for KuroKura~

Aww, this is so cute! Kawaii! ^^ I usually don't like AU fics, but this a definite exception! I love it! Ganbatte! Don't give up on it!
You haven't updated in two years o.O... You should update! Everyone is waiting!

I like your fic...
and I can't wait for the next chapter...
Gambatte Kudasai!!