wow talk about one hell of a story ..just think if the average person had to go through that all the time just to be with the one they love ..talk about a hard knock life ..anyway im glad they finally ended up together ..however wat disappointed me was sesshomaru being able to revive rin .. even though they are my favore couple i think you should have made him suffer ..because of his own stupidity he lost what was important to him i think it would have been better had he not been able to revive her ..then he could have lived with his own mistakes eternally.. anyway im off to the sequel

I loved this story it was written very well, congrats and thank you for your effort.

awe! So cute the way it ended and all!

That was great!

It was a lot like the whisper of breath’s death upon the whole of the world…

I am not great at Grammar but I am 99% positive it supposed to go this way;

It was a lot like the whisper of death's breath upon the whole of the world…

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YAY! Happy ending! Loved it!

Oh shoot, to forget about what she's wearing at this time.

I thought Inuyasha would keep Kagome's possible pregnancy a secret since if Sesshoumaru is the way he's being he might send someone to kill Kagome and any possible child.

*rolls eyes* Seriously? Did Sesshoumaru just say that? *sigh* Can't believe he's still so obsessed over that sword.

Aw man, what has he done to Rin? She should not have to run horses to death.

I suppose the summons has something to do with the companion story or sequel to this. I wonder what Sesshoumaru wants?

Yup, most hybrids are sterile, but as with anything else there are exceptions. Take for example this mule breeder I know of. He has bred many, many mules, all are supposed to be sterile, but actually a couple were fertile.
Anywho, now what? I'm looking forward to reading what happens next.

Aw, so sad.

If "han" is "half" I wonder what "quarter" is in Japanese other than "yonbun no ichi"? Rolls right off the tongue, doesn't it? :-P

Of course, a birth control pill, so simple it slipped my mind. Unless of course there is more than the pill involved in their infertility. Again, I'm liking the story.