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| Mablung Elensar 2005-01-01 ch 11,  | abuseOh! Suspense, very nice. More please! |
| mikari 2005-01-01 ch 3, | abuseit reads really nice, the flow of the sentences is really good...unlike mine XD; too bad the chapter's so short :P hehe... well, back to read the rest! awsome story so far ^_^ |
| Mystica-Moshi 2004-12-31 ch 5, | abuseBeep you made Genis seem like such a wuss... |
| Mystica-Moshi 2004-12-31 ch 4, | abuse... Freaky... |
| Mystica-Moshi 2004-12-31 ch 3, | abuseI always resented the fact that Kratos stayed up in Derris Kharlan... Who's that voice!? Why such a short chappy? |
| Mystica-Moshi 2004-12-31 ch 2, | abuseLol nice! Very interesting how you named the tree Yggdrasil. I just supposed it was called Symphonia. How could you make Zelos die in ur game!? You coulda saved him if u had a high relationship with him!Beep I accidentally made Lloyd like Raine... gross. |
| Kimkizna 2004-12-21 ch 5, | abuseAnotehr great chapter! |
| Kimkizna 2004-12-21 ch 4, | abuseYAY Kratos! |
| Kimkizna 2004-12-21 ch 3, | abuseI wonder what will happen next? Oh well guess more reading |
| Kimkizna 2004-12-21 ch 2, | abusePretty good so far |
| Kimkizna 2004-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was a pretty good start |
| Mablung Elensar 2004-12-21 ch 10, | abuseVery good, if only you made the chapters longer, the I'd have more to read! |
| Jayuna 2004-12-21 ch 10, | abuseinteresting chapter! great job! |
| UlimateSwordsman 2004-12-04 ch 9, | abuseDude ur story is great so far. But kratos would no if Lloyd had a sister. KEEP GOING!! |
| Mablung Elensar 2004-12-04 ch 9, | abuseVery good, excellent. I like the new character. |