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Thrythlind
2009-04-02 . chapter 10
ah aha, you did fix up Dachi, cool

^_^
Thrythlind
2009-04-01 . chapter 3
Well, not certain if you have dealt with this or not yet, since I haven't read all the way through (and its getting late, so I likely won't get to)...but do consider being a bit nicer to Kodachi as well...

As apparently the only fiancee that has admitted she knows Ranma doesn't love her, I tend to think that she finds Ranma and the finacees as the closest things to real friends she has. I don't really have a pairing in mind for her, as I tend to be of the feeling that she is the least prepared for a real romantic relationship. (unlike many, I don't even think she has an understanding of sex beyond the level of teen-adult manga romances)

Anyway, yeah, the Kodachi-phile says, good story and looking forward to more.
James Rennfield
2007-10-09 . chapter 10
Another great story by Innortal. Can't wait for the next update and definitely can't wait to see how Ranma takes "the news" about Nabiki when he finds out.

I really loved what Nodoka did for the Amazon, it was priceless.
bleh
2007-07-08 . chapter 4
i am sorry but the emperors family have been the only ruling line in all of japanese history
the reason being that the emperor himself has no true power and through out almost all of their history has been a figure head except in certain cituations where they were given the full support of the people. an example would be the meiji restoration and even then it was not absolute. so nadoka wiping the chinese amazons off of the planet is highly unlike because the emperor doesn't have complete power but more of a slight sway over things that the best case would be for the emperor to have the chinese government destroy the amazons. also in any situation that didn't result in the government of china destroying but the japanese doing it instead it could be considered a sign of war.
griffenvamp
2007-07-03 . chapter 10
update please?
FF
2007-05-24 . chapter 10
this is a realy good story i like the way you examen the people in it.
griffenvamp
2007-04-30 . chapter 10
so when are you going to update this story and have ranma find out he is a father? plus please update your other story;s too thank you for wrighting them i really enjoyed them
loaned
2006-12-08 . chapter 10
^^. Cool story. Polygamy...what a concept!^^. You seem to favor a shampoo/nabiki/ram,apairing for this and I like how you're throwing it out there. good job and keep up the good work!^^
neo82
2006-11-24 . chapter 10
awesome story so far...cant wait for more.
Babs Yerunkle
2006-08-28 . chapter 10
I must assume that you mean for the "all three" option to succeed here. First, given the beginning, and the strong focus on Nabiki (and her "situation"), it would be tragic if she didn't win. At the same time, the growing closeness and friendship of the girls would be wasted (in a writing sense) if something didn't come of it.

This is definitely one of the most innovative "fix all of Ranma's problems" situations I've seen. Particularly with the solution in progress for both Kodachi and Akane (even if not accomplished), and good advice having been given to both Ryouga and Mousse.

In fact, at this point, I'm wondering if everything is going TOO well. Of course, Ranma is still incredibly stressed out, but no matter what happens, nearly everyone should be content (at worse) or thrilled (at best).

And we've seen some excellent growth -- actually among all the female characters, but among Nabiki most strongly (which makes sense, since this is her story). Oh, right, this is HER third chance, isn't it? Not Ranma's.

In any case, Nabiki has shown her nobility and selflessness clearly, which is why she deserves to win. I think Shampoo and Ukyou now also need to have similar opportunities for noble self-sacrifice. And with things going all too well, at the moment, it occured to me...

What if Shampoo and/or Ukyou found out about the pregnancy. (That makes a nice cliffhanger on its own.) For them to deserve co-wife status, they have to take the noble path, privately seeing Ranma and insisting that if he doesn't marry Nabiki, he can't marry them either. Or perhaps insisting that he HAS to marry Nabiki. Or some such mess-up. They need to sacrifice themselves.

Then they'll be worthy. And being worthy, he'll have to take them all.

(Now, how can we sneak Konatsu into the bed?)
anon
2006-06-21 . chapter 10
WOW! great story so far, I hope you update soon! What a great idea, and a pregnant nabiki too!
DCWestby
2006-05-02 . chapter 10
Excellent progress on this story, it is coming together, keep it up.
Nightcrawler2000
2006-04-20 . chapter 10
yo
sadfru
2006-04-15 . chapter 3
Just reading this story know and decided to throw in my two cents for the story ideas at the bottem of the chapter, idea 2) and 5) are my favourites for continueing/writing, 2) because I have yet to see a Ranma fic that has a redo to hie actual birth or even done well, and 5) because I think it would be good especially having Ranko try and get Ranma to see her as a mate and how she would react with the others treatment of him, always do love having the NWC gang get there ** beat down.

:) Peace
tomdj1701
2006-04-08 . chapter 10
Just read all 10 chs., and I have to save I loved what you have so far and looking forward to ch 11.
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