Wowie... That was mildly depressing. It was very well written, for all it was sad. You are very talented. _- I look forward to reading more of your work! Keep writing!

plz don't do no more sad fics. i h8ed dat 1. 2 mean.

GARY CAN'T DIE!

too late *sob sob*

Why did Gary die?

Why oh why oh why! *sob sob*

*sigh*

well, i like it (APART FROM WHEN GARY DIES!)

well, anyways, please kepp it coming, and i shall remain reading,

Lady Sapphira.

I ahve a sick sick little mind and I found it pretty good, way too fast moving at the end though. good job! How old was jon? like 21?

You could have drawn it out... details...