interesting start ^_^ UPDATE SOON! DON'T ABANDON THIS STORY!!

ooh!! MYSTERIOUS!! ;P Seriously!! UPDATE! Ne? Later!!

hi sounds good so far keep up the good work ^_^

Great chapter. Please update.

pretty good start

Great fic. Please update. I wonder who those people are?

cool story!

Hey there my soon-to-be-beta once I get A Shinobi's smile up and running again. Sorry about the hugest delay ever! I'm just working on Captivation for the time being...but this story is coming along great Continue!

Make sure the Tsunade isn't too OOC and your font isn't on bold next time. ^^ you're doing wonderful

...you just had to go and end it there didn't ya? didn't ya? just when it was getting good you go and end. *glares daggers* You had better update and soon cause i want to know whats going to happen next so please as soon as you can update. Ja Ne Airy

Me like! Please continue!

Not bad, but I don't find it specially catchy. This first chapter was quite average.