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| Eilisan 2004-11-18 ch 1, | abuseWow - awesome stuff. The light bantering between the two, the soul searching. I'll say it again - wow. Your descriptions of the great hall in the torch light, the way you wrote about night and their emotions all set a beautiful tone for the story that I really enjoyed. Thanks so much for sharing - and keep writing! :) |
| im hermiones twin 2 2004-11-08 ch 1, | abusewow that is one of the best stories ive ever read it was awesome as!! i believe mcgonagall is an old softie on the inside and wants to hug people as well! congrats that was great! |
| crazyharrysfireworks1239 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was so powerful...I loved how you captured the emotions of a wartorn world. Very poignant, considering today's situations. My favorite line was "There are no winners in a war." Thank you for writing it. |
| LinZE 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abusefab - totally fabulous. thanks for sharing, post again soon. Linds x |
| Angelina Sparrow 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abuseYey! I applaud you! Another Dumbledore/McGonagall lover! Very good, I've tried one too. |
| Intelligent Witch 2004-11-07 ch 1, | abusebeautiful story Emily |