Aw, such a cute thing. I was wondering what was happening when they went. Lol :-P

Oh, I don't know if I'm talking out of place, but "Annoyed Reader" this was just like a branch out of a story that (which was awsome by the way :-D) not just a random drabble. So.. I don't know, I might be out of line, but then again you might be out of line :-/ sorry if I'm acting totally oblivious...

What IS this? I came looking for a DAT fic, not your self-indulgent fapping over an entitlement ** life. IF it's not a day after tomorrow fic, WHY put it in the day after tomorrow section?

Use a livejournal to put this ** in. that's what it's for.

Hilarious,
you should make another story with Burger King,
and Taco Bell, and Wendy's, AND Jack In The Box.

I'm slightly confused. Is this supposed to be a Spider-Man crossover or something? I don't recall any of the characters' names being Peter Parker, so I assume it's a crossover. How'd he get there? You need to tell that part of the story at the beginning or make a flashback or something.

That was great! I've been waiting for this story, and now it's here and it's perfect just like I knew it would be. I have to go, but I loved it! ~Punkin

LOL. I have the biggest smile on my face, this was just too funny. I loved Laura, poor thing, all drugged out and stupid. And Sloatee, attempting to take advantage of her; though, of course, she'd be happy to go out back with Sam and see just what surprises awaited her ;) Okay, that's enough of that. Parker was just too funny; if that had been me, which on numerous times it has been (ordering for the boys), I would have gotten them whatever *I* wanted. And if Peter had been on the floor I would have grabbed that bald boy up (probably knocking his head against the table) and thrown him into his seat, **-slapped him and took away his Hot Wheel. As for Laura, I would have been like, "Pull yourself together, child." I'm glad she got her Sarah Mellot Hello Kitty toy. But I just have one question: what were three old women doing in a McDolands anyway? Don't they have anything better to do then stare at a dying bald kid and a drugged teenager? I guess not. This story was just too funny, I'm glad you finally posted it. I reminded me of going out to eat lunch today...*shudder*...I love this story! :) Yay! It was good. Hehe

Eww...I McDonalds. I haven't seen the Day After Tommorow, but this story stands out on its own. Excellent!