This was great. I've never seen a good story with these two before, and there needs to be more fics about more background characters.

I love the construction of the story, and the characterisation of Chiffon and Kahlua.

Aw! Kawaii! _

I love your writing style! Very descriptive and pretty!_ also it makes me happy to see a fic about Kahlua and Chiffon since everyone seems to neglect them even though they're such awsome characters! _

P.S. Yay! Another person whose read the entire manga! I'm not alone! XD

Yes, gasp and shock I am ... reviewing! :O

This story is so sweet and gentle! I don't know the characters so I can't know if they are in character or not, but I know you stuck to one personality for each and that was good. Just like all your other stories: you needn't have watched or read the series to enjoy the fanfiction. I'm still not *entirely* sure what they look like, but that wasn't the point, was it? XD

Anyway, I like it when you write light little snipits like this. Just a piece of someone's life. The bit in the middle about how they became lovers was appreciated for the originality there. I think you really fleshed out the characters during that sequence by not falling to the OMG ANGST FEST of "the guy I loved raped me!" but you didn't make it instant lov either. Very good taste, as usual. I really need to start reading your stuff again!

- Kira