Reviews for Changing Series: A new Foe

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Meira Evenstar 2007-04-27 ch 25,	abuseHey there! Glad you're still working on this story. Keep up the great work and please update again soon! ~meira~
Ayame.Marian.Mouri 2007-04-06 ch 24,	abusePlease finish as soon as you can. This is a really good story.
Meira Evenstar 2006-12-05 ch 24,	abuseYAY you updated! I'm glad you're still working on this fic. It's awesome! Keep up the great work! ~meira~
EagleBlaze 2006-10-15 ch 23,	abuseWhoho, keep up the very good work and I can not wait for the next update! I like it on how you focus on the ronins. I also liked it on how you made Rowen jealous of Kento's family and on how Sage admited that he only kissed one girl ;-). I was wondering if you have heard of Samurai Fanservice? If you haven't its a board for RW fans. Type in Ghost of the Dawns penname on and you'll see a link to the forum (they're really great and the people are really nice). Keep up the very good work!
Taz 2006-07-19 ch 21, anon.	abuseThe last few chapters haven't really been going very far with regard to plot developement. I'm not expert critic, but it seems highly episodal: Katie and Sarah attack, retreat, over and over, and yet we get nowhere. I don't really feel too much for those two girls, they seem kinda...flat for some reason. I really just want to know what happenend to Kayura. That part about her seriously crushing on Rowen in the previous story seems to be the deepest thing going on, but it hasn't been touched on in a while. Don't mean to sound harsh or anything, it's perhaps becuse I'm up late lol. You do write very well and I enjoy your style, but the chapters need to be about more than some recurring fight scenes. All the best!
Taz 2006-07-18 ch 6, anon.	abuseHeheh, Christian missionary? We ain't all that crazy now. I'm wondering is there are any pictures of the Ronin's families..I don't know what the heck they look like. I'd like to see what Chun Fa looks like (I just imagine this cute, slightly pudgy Chinese girl).
Taz 2006-07-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseSweet developement I say! Very well written and flows decently, not agonizingly slow or irritatingly fast. I don't remember too much about Kayura so I'm glad you're writing about her too ^^ The way you present Rowen and Sage's friendship is poignant too. Eh, I see what you mean. People nowadays are so dulled by perverted stuff they can't fathom a healthy male friendship anymore. I have a lot of friends who love each other like siblings so it's not too far off for me.
1TheScorpion2 2006-05-01 ch 23,	abuseAnother great chapter. I really like how you expressed the difference of personalities between Sarah and Katie. It kind of reminds me of the yin yang symbol. I'm really excited to see what's gonna happen next. Keep up the great work.
1TheScorpion2 2006-02-28 ch 22,	abuseGood chapter. I agree that the tossing the jewel back and forth was pretty funny. How come it only activated when Kento touched it? Perhaps that will come to play in the next chapter. I also wonder who the new evil people will be considering Sara and Katie are out.
Zammy 2006-02-27 ch 22, anon.	abuseCOOL, Please Update Soon!
Meira Evenstar 2006-02-26 ch 22,	abuseWhat a great chapter! Good work. The guys finally suceeded! I really can't wait to see(read) what's gonna happen next! Update again soon!
EagleBlaze954 2006-02-16 ch 21,	abuseKeep up the very good work! I can't wait for the next update! Normally I am a Ryo/Mia fan but I don't mind this fic ;-). Is Rowen's problem with his dad going to tie into any of this? Just wondered. Can't wait until the next update and am putting this story under favorites click
Zammy 2006-02-08 ch 21, anon.	abuseAnother Awsome Chapter, Please Update Soone!
Meira Evenstar 2006-02-07 ch 21,	abuseVery awesome! Keep up the good work! Update soon!
1TheScorpion2 2006-02-06 ch 21,	abuseWow! Another amazing chapter full of action. I like how the ronins have little feuds amungst themselves. Not another cliffhanger! LOL. Cliffhangers are good; they build angst. I wonder who this knew character is at the school; Tray? I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

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