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draco hermione lover
2007-07-01 . chapter 7
i love it nice touch of the phantom it is my favorite movie in the whole world
Lady Arabella Malfoy
2006-01-10 . chapter 12
Frankly speaking, I was a bit sceptical, when i saw that a lot of people make D/G and Phantom crossovers, but you didn't disappoint me in the slightest. You plot was very original and logical. I, probably, lacked the flying lessons. I mran , in the beginnig Draco says that flying id his only love. I waited for you to develope that point.
But on the whole the story is very extreme and emotional. Very well done!
monikiis
2005-08-30 . chapter 12
I really enjoyed the story. I just didnt think that Draco running to his dad all smiles was like him...really OOC well...it was good how ever. Keep up the good work!
The Fayt In Purple
2005-08-24 . chapter 12
YES! now THAT is what i'm talking about! *hugs her and dances around* great stuff. i loved how you gave nothing away for a bit and then and only then let the truth be known. the last paragraph was perfect, btw. adn sometimes you just have to have a sad ending- stories sometimes have a direction they feel they must take, and going along with it, while it may not match your plans, is the only way to go. it takes guts to do it when it might not meet with the approval of teh readers, so kudos to you for having the courage.
-The Fayt ^-^
ps-*hands you flowers* congrats on finishing!
The Fayt In Purple
2005-08-24 . chapter 11
well...no offense, but i think you kinda rushed it a bit. i mean, the last chapters took their time and sort of meandered along, adn then suddenly this one and it's all come to a head. and, this chapter should have been a little...i don;t know, darker maybe. the story is great, but phantom is dark, and draco is dark, and this chapter, as the climax, needed a little more of that darkness.
not your best chapter, sad to say. i still love you, though.
-The Fayt ^-^
LatentBeauty
2005-08-22 . chapter 12
I LOVED THE ENDING. It wasn't cliched or stupid or expected. Thank you. I hope to see more of your writing.
squirt
2005-08-22 . chapter 12
very entertaining story. :) yes, the ending was kind of sad, but i dont think Phantom CAN end happily. not even a harry potter version. you did a nice job converting the story line. and i did like the ending. i always wanted christine to end up with the phantom.
Kerichi
2005-08-22 . chapter 12
Any end that has Ginny with Draco instead of Harry is happy, no matter if a little 'corniness' slides in, lol.

Ack on the "kissing him long and full on the lips", and oh my heck you killed off (I'll just say 'you know who' so as to not freak possible readers)

As for questions raised in this chap- where in hiding, how did parents/family/friends react, what are they doing now, any kids and the ones left unanswered from before, imagine a Parisian shrug...c'est la vie...All's well that ends well...Adieu!
billy
2005-08-22 . chapter 12
cute
GoldenFawkes
2005-08-22 . chapter 11
Ack! Arm's gone? Poor Draco...
billy
2005-08-22 . chapter 11
update soon
ThELoSTInDiGo
2005-08-21 . chapter 11
ok u SO need to update soon. really plz plz plz plz i need to kno the ending of ur storie it is really good. congrates on a joob well done!
Kerichi
2005-08-21 . chapter 11
“Well,” said Ginny, gaining confidence, “that makes you my enemy! Because I promised to protect and love Harry Potter, the Dark Lord’s sworn enemy! So you’re my enemy, Draco!”

He tells her he needs her so she changes her mind that he's evil and without a heart and says she understands "And I love you too, so...I want to stay with you"?

Oh, why did you have Draco use Unforgiveable Curses and try to kill Harry? And then cut off his arm to remove the Dark Mark in a Star Wars dramatic gesture but go Phantom and say go with him, forget about me...

If you explain that, even if the end is classic Phantom depressing, I look forward to the epilogue!
LatentBeauty
2005-08-21 . chapter 11
Aww, I love that. I can't wait until the epilouge. This story has torn me between Draco, just like the Phantom of the Opera does. I always can't decide who I want her to end up with. Anyways update soon. And thanks for the reviews.
Dragonz soul
2005-08-11 . chapter 10
pleese write more like now plreese loved licius by da way
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