|Reviews for In the Pale Moonlight|
| Avelera 8/29/11 . chapter 1
*Flails* This is so amazing. Gah. I love your writing, I love Calig... I mean Cartagia. He and Londo are just so IC in this, I could hear their voices in my head as I read it. Londo's careful words were breathtaking to read, and I truly felt like any moment disaster could strike. Lovely!
| Mithen 9/15/09 . chapter 1
This was awesome and perfectly captured the lurking sense of horror Cartagia's court evoked. I especially liked Londo's realization that Vir and Cartagia were almost the same age. So much unspoken there, so much Londo won't even let himself think yet. Great story.
| OnlyMostlyHarmless 8/18/09 . chapter 1
Very chilling. The Shadows are warm and fuzzy beings compared with Cartagia. The actor that played him was just brilliant - you can see the gleam of insanity in his eyes. I'm disgressing.
You captured the verbal fencing of the Centauri perfectly, Cartagia is frightening, and I don't think that I could say how much I love your writing.
| HarryPotter'sgirl17 6/14/08 . chapter 1
You made Cartagia so creepy you gave me chills. Very well writ and the details you added made it that more enjoyable and that more spooky.
Very well done, yes?
| Booji 8/19/07 . chapter 1
This totally seems like something Cartagia would do. Very good.
| Yma 1/12/07 . chapter 1
Very good, chilling, beautifully written, new, but yet it felt like it could have come right out of the show itself.
| Crossbow 12/7/04 . chapter 1
Wonderful dialogue. Although, I'm pretty sure that if that's what Cartagia really wanted, Londo's excuse wouldn't have put him off. I think that the way it would really play out is that Cartagia would change his mind later and barge unannounced into Londo's room. But anyhoo, great job handling my favorite character. I really enjoyed reading this.
| Sheila51 12/1/04 . chapter 1
How do you come up with such things? A beautiful story, beautifully told. And all the more so for Londo's craftiness! The man talks himself out of everything!
| Andraste 11/23/04 . chapter 1
... and now that it's working won't let me log in, possibly because I'm using an old version of IE.
Still, I can review this excellent story regardless *g*. I think this may be one of the best things you've written in B5 fandom, and given the usual high standard of your work that's saying something. I've always said you were evil, but I had no idea you could capture Cartagia quite so well.
I love both his advances to Londo, which feel perfectly in character, and Londo's careful response. The little word games he plays with the Emperor - especially describing him as his destiny - feel like they could have come straight out of canon. All in all, excellent work.
| soavezefiretto 11/10/04 . chapter 1
You make a wonderful Cartagia, he's perfect. So is Londo.
| Hilary Weston 11/8/04 . chapter 1
What a lovely piece of writing.
I heard Cartagia's voice as I read, you captured him so well.
Londo's insights were very well done. His concern for Vir and Timov and his whole planet were evident in your writing.
Keep it up.