Reviews for Lead and Follow

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Lukie15 2008-06-09 ch 10,	abuseI liked this a lot. I've always wanted to learn ballroom dance. And not many people can put such passion into their writing when they're describing a dance. They can't make it believable. "At last, when fully upright Harry left Draco exposed in the cool room as he slowly prowled around his frame, gently passing kisses across his upper back. He noticed the arch in Draco's neck as it followed the trail as it fluttered across his back. At last, when Harry faced him, he opened up his arms again and drew Draco in--their eyes locking." You made it so I could see them dancing together and I could see the passion in their eyes and bodies. It was lovely and it made me want to learn even more. Brilliant.
sehne 2008-05-30 ch 10,	abuseAn amazing story! It caught my attention from beginning to end. So thank you for sharing this wonderfull fic. Now I want to learn how dance, i just hope i can an instructor like malfoy or potter, or both.
Malissandre 2008-05-09 ch 10,	abuseI love it ! It was just brilliant ! One of my favourite so far !
Sen2TOS9 2008-04-17 ch 10,	abuseThis was awesome! squeals Gosh, this was one of the best HPDM fics I have ever read! Amazing work!
Rokkis 2008-04-17 ch 10,	abuseAh, sigh! That was a good story! Loved the way you used the dancing to bring them together, even after 5 yrs of war:D Can honestly say, that this story would make a great war-time movie:D Cheers!
SweetSorrow1 2008-03-27 ch 10,	abuseFantastic story. Praises for you!
SweetSorrow1 2008-03-26 ch 5,	abuse"Draco looked at him now, a smirk that Harry often saw reserved for particularly attractive females, "Why not? You make a perfectly good foot rest, you know."" FAVORITE LINE.
SweetSorrow1 2008-03-26 ch 4,	abuseI'm only on chapter four, but as I read this story, my face can't help but stay in a :D position. My heart keeps fluttering ... I really like how you are writing this story. On to chapter 5!
BookWormNiri 2008-03-06 ch 10,	abuseCUTE! I really liked how you blended the war into the storyline and made it work. Also liked how their feelings came naturally and didn't involve angst filled monologues. Most of all I liked how you managed to capture their characters. Great work~
keisan 2008-03-03 ch 10,	abuseI loved that! Lol, sorry, I feel like I've been reading this fic for years...and I suppose, technically, I have. :) LOVED the ending, especially that last line "Draco once again in the lead, Harry following close behind..." Too brilliant. I also kind of liked how you dealt with the war, it would've been nice for them to have gotten together during the war, especially since five years is a huge span of time for a fairly new couple (although I'll give them that they're not just any newish couple :P). Anyway, overall, it was an excellent story, the characterizations were spot on, plot was wicked and I love how Harry and Draco's characters matured (in how they behave and interacted) as you demonstrated through their actions and reactions after the war. I'd love to see a short fic about them together afterwards if you were so inclined to write one, I think it'd be fabulous especially in the 'Lead and Follow' universe. :)
Norwegian Sunshine 2008-03-01 ch 10,	abuseA! What a wonderful story... :') I liked how you described the war, I thought it would be like a long boring thing xD Applause for you ;D
Atrineas 2008-01-19 ch 10,	abuseI had fun reading this but only one point. In chapter 9 you say the war took 5 years and 369 days... but isn't that just 6 years and 4 days? Regards, Atrineas
tonihly 2008-01-03 ch 10,	abuseAbsolutely fantastic fic (: Well done
Double Spell 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuse~Opening the door with a loud creak, absently wondering why it was never shut all the way (Peeves may have been dense, but he wasn’t that dense)~ -Peeves? where does Peeves come into all this?
Gnos fo Ytinrete 2007-12-25 ch 10,	abuseGood ending. lol. The whole thing was good but I'm real happy with that tidy ending with the 'leading' and 'following', expecially in that sequence and who doing which; remniscent of how it all started. Mm. Good job overall, although that war seemed a bit too well summarized. I do realize that you were trying to focus on Harry and Draco and just wanted that out of the way. Good job. I've never actually read a story that circled around dancing so much but I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing. Cya. Merry Christmas, Liliana

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